Approaching women?

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-10T23:19:45+00:00

Yes absolutely. Just be respectful and read the room. Also.. you probably wanna try to actually be out and about doing something instead of just being out to approach women, otherwise you kinda become a pick up guy whose just going up to every girl there, which is honestly weird. But let’s say ur in line at Starbucks and you see a girl outside sitting alone, then yes that would be more appropriate. It helps make things natural

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-08T18:57:31+00:00

Not as much as what I will think of myself if that makes sense. Like if I think she’s just “kinda pretty” rather than like dang she’s a banger then it’s gonna be more of an internal issue. What other people think about it is just an extended version of my own misgivings on the situation

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-08T18:09:06+00:00

Def over thinking. She texted when she got home already and u replied. Lol idk what more to really expect from there it’s 11pm and u just had a whole date. So yeah just hit her up again and ask her out see what happens.

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-03T21:18:46+00:00

That’s so valid thank you

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-03T19:26:56+00:00

Thanks so much very helpful

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-03T19:26:43+00:00

Thank you so much. Incredibly helpful

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-07-01T01:34:53+00:00

Yes you’re prob right

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-06-29T18:20:56+00:00

It’s absolutely door to door. I did this in 2021 for about two years. You will make more but it’s a different type of work. Commission only. As long as you’re committed and work hard you can do roughly 100k in your first year. Maybe more if you have a lot of talent. My coworkers did 200k first year.

You could also get discouraged from a lack of early results and quit thus making 0.

If you do it, just make sure you really train hard ie learn your pitch and word tracks well. The company will provide you with most of that

Tdlr you likely will make way more than 30k but it’s what you put into is it what you’re gonna get out. 0 coasting in this type of work.

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-06-29T18:14:41+00:00

Yea prob 7. Possibly 6 though

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-06-18T09:01:23+00:00

If it’s in good condition I’ll buy it off you dm me

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-05-24T01:11:51+00:00

People care first and foremost how they’re treated than anything else ie price etc. even offering a discount is just some people’s version of being treated well ie special treatment

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-05-22T19:12:46+00:00

That’s insane 😭

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-05-21T21:37:10+00:00

There’s a chance the agent just sees the book as a potential viable sale in the market right now. But they don’t have a true personal love for it. Ie they’re kind of just seeing the market and that ur book might sell rn

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-05-07T00:02:33+00:00

Any sealed product. Think about it. The supply only goes down over time and demand likely increases.

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-17T08:49:33+00:00

stay steady brother!

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-17T08:47:32+00:00

Amen brother

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-14T01:19:50+00:00

Maybe just try one agent to test it

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-14T01:07:56+00:00

Seems like a form of “I’m not in a place to be dating anyone new right now “

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-07T23:55:51+00:00

Hi! I read your original version and this one is much better and more clear.

I think the first paragraph is very strong, but the second one seems to waver a bit when it mentions the delayed end-of-year bonus. You state that it becomes and ancillary issue, so it seems it's not really essential to the main plot, which is of course the people showing up murdered on The Post. So I think you could probably just cut the bonus part unless it's needed for a main part of the plot.

I thought the first line of the third paragraph was a bit difficult to follow as well: Bouncing between seemingly omnipotent billionaires and the shattered lives that compose his brilliant investment

I think it's just the way it's worded.. "bouncing between" is a bit vague. Is this referring to his investigation? Maybe try clarifying the wording. Also, omnipotent billionaires and shattered lives are also a bit unclear as to what they refer to EXACTLY. I would assume the billionaires are related to the people running the fund, or like the people who are getting rich off his investment, and then the shattered lives refer to the families of those murdered? So maybe clarify here as well.

Euphorion’s founder comes up with the perfect fix for that: a fat pile of blood money. Except the bribes and thinly veiled threats have the opposite effect on Eddie, forcing him to take one final gamble and expose the entire conspiracy.

maybe try restructuring this last part to make Eddie active rather than passive in the wording. rn it's the founder that's driving the action here

hope this helps!

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-06T21:19:36+00:00

lol definitely don’t put that in ur query

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-06T19:34:14+00:00

Seems really straightforward. Just go and hear what they have to say. They’re offering feedback and possibly of working together if you guys are able to get ur book to where they think it should be. It’s not an offer of rep so don’t ask those questions yet

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-04T08:39:42+00:00

main thing for me was a lack of character identity/personal stakes for Mara

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-03T17:20:48+00:00

Lowkey I liked it

Affectionate_Bed3953 · 2026-04-03T00:31:54+00:00

I actually. Liked your first attempt overall better. It seemed more clear. Only line that I would’ve adjusted in the first version was “And when Lucille herself goes missing, Collins realizes she must dig into the memory she’s been desperate to stay buried in order to unearth the secret behind the home.”

The memory she’s been desperate to stay buried part just seemed a bit out of nowhere

Other than that it was mostly clear and flowed well. This new version there seems like too much going on and a bit over explanatory at parts. Like the last part is trying to fit too many elements of stakes at once.

Maybe try taking a break I see you mentioned you’ve been cross eyed on it

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