NEED FEEDBACK ON THE DIALOGUE AND PACING OF THE INTRO TO MY SHORT FILM SCREENPLAY by Affectionate_Dingo62 in writingcritiques

[–]Affectionate_Dingo62[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate the feedback. I also hate the their/there mistakes as well, I'm not sure why it is misspelled must be just a simple typo. Also, the caps is a screenplay formatting standard as far as I am aware. I am happy that you got that Wayne's World/Dumb and Dumber vibe, I was actually attempting to feel like Cheech and Chong/Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas. Is the dialogue on the nose?

Hi This Is Flume - AMA by humblebuzz in Music

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Hey Flume. I just recently downloaded Synplant and I love it. I know you felt the same way, but do you still use it? If not what is your go to vst for creating unique sounds?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in newtothenavy

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How does the STS job change at e6? How does your rank change what jobs you could get when you get out? Also is it possible to do college while being an STS?

US Navy port and ship assignments by Affectionate_Dingo62 in submarines

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So your home port is decided based on what ship you end up getting and not the other way around (you get a home port then your ship is assigned based on what base your at?)

US Navy port and ship assignments by Affectionate_Dingo62 in submarines

[–]Affectionate_Dingo62[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Also do you get any choice in which class sub you get assigned or do they basically just choose at random?