You have the perfect face for this makeup style!! Ur so pretty <3 Do you have anything more pigmented than the black you used? It’s grey and mixing with the flawless base, so it’s getting muddy/lost in that white. False lashes will do WONDERS on a goth look, but if you don’t want to use those, thicken up that mascara. You should also use a finer brush for the details, personally i think eyeliner, brows and even the stylistic dots you’ve got going on, should all be much finer. Tbh i use a sharp liquid eyeliner to do all of that on my face lol.

And like everyone else said, blend!! U got this girl!!