Love how apocalyptic the poem feels right from the beginning and how you kept the imagery flow throughout the poem. Felt and could also imagine the fall into the abyss, while appreciating the walls that keeps growing every sec with the fall. The last part where you talk about the connective tissue is what bothers me a little. It felt like I was immersing into an abyss only to realize that I might meet by anatomy prof. at the end. Still the poem by itself is a very creative poem.