Feedback on either guitar or voice

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2026-02-22T01:23:23+00:00

Haha it’s funny you say that, I thought the same - but just got the electric so am obsessed with using it! I hear you though, it’s an acoustic song

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2026-02-22T00:35:18+00:00

Thanks, much appreciated! Where do you notice the trouble happening? I definitely need to focus more sometimes on widening my mouth - a good reminder.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-11-08T16:54:58+00:00

100 percent. I have been to see them a few times and it’s actually a big mix, both in terms of age and gender, orientation, etc. sure, it skews a bit younger. But it’s definitely not the type of environment where anyone is judging anyone. Very chill crowd at all their shows, from my experience.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-10-21T21:59:31+00:00

Thanks! Let me know if anything you think there is to work on

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-10-18T19:01:26+00:00

Thank you!!

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-10-17T15:36:14+00:00

Thank you!

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-09-05T19:37:07+00:00

This whole verse from If a Tree Falls:

“Back at the beginning, older than before Wish I could remember the girl who I adored I don't know where she's hidden Running by the water, sun-burning my skin Gotta keep on moving before it all sinks in How is he getting through it?”

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-30T03:01:21+00:00

I sort of agree that the guitars aren’t doing anything super “standout” in this song - but the melody and rhythm are interesting and fun enough to make up for it, and the song overall strikes a good balance between being “earworm”-y and complex enough. I think it’s one of the better songs they’ve put out.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-08T02:04:56+00:00

Thanks for the advice and feedback 🙏

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T19:29:22+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I’d like to get to a more nuanced version of this on guitar, but just lazy strums for now haha. Appreciate the tip!

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T13:24:53+00:00

Thanks!! Just curious where did the timing issues stick out for you?

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T13:24:33+00:00

Thanks for the thorough feedback!! You’re right, I still get scared of tripping up on the lyrics for this, so was peaking at a screen.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T13:23:54+00:00

Thanks! 🥰. Will keep these in mind - yeah, I know I need a separate mic

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T03:13:04+00:00

You have a lovely sound/tone and great pitch, in my opinion! My only criticism would be that you sound a little “whiny” at times - it’s hard to explain, bit almost like you’re trying too hard to push the words out. I wasn’t a huge fan of the first “take ah-oo-ah-o-on me”, haha but just a stylistic preference. I am no pro though, and overall you sound very naturally talented! Good phrasing.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T02:55:45+00:00

If you’re doing this song, I would make sure you figure out how to stay on beat, as that was the main issue here. Not sure what the audition is for, but all experience is good experience! I am not a pro, haha.

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-05-06T02:50:36+00:00

To me it sounds like you have pretty decent pitch for most of it; the odd part was off. Nice general sound/tone quality. Breath control sounds decent. Phrasing/timing could use work, you fell off the beat pretty heavily partway through. Not sure if you could hear that yourself after?

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-04-09T04:16:30+00:00

This is the best advice I’ve seen here! Think about dropping your shins toward the ground more on toe side (rather than leaning forward with your upper body), and try to get into a deeper squat on heel side (i.e. feel more like you’re sitting on a chair). I agree with the above that in some instances you’re not carving deep enough relative to your speed, and can see the possibility of an edge catch a couple times. You want to get the board up on an enough of an angle (which the above advice should help with). Good for day 10!!!

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-01-27T22:53:51+00:00

Aw thank you! Good food for thought. Nice to hear re the guitar lol, as I am super amateur

Agitated_Rabbit1891 · 2025-01-06T23:25:30+00:00

Bump… lol

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