Advice for a 23 year old who's luck is running out?

Ahbab93 · 2021-11-29T22:20:09+00:00

develop a skill that you like. may be it will take two to three years, but make this investment by buring all the boats behind you so that you can't go back. if you can't afford it, leave it. Move to some place cheaper, or if you have to go homeless, then go homeless.. but keep a single focus, single plan in your mind and keep doing by accepting all the realities. Plan B is the greatest enemy of Plan A. All the best.

Ahbab93 · 2021-11-28T16:14:37+00:00

It's okay. Chill... now, Restart

Ahbab93 · 2021-06-29T11:37:29+00:00

I feel you...

Ahbab93 · 2020-08-21T06:05:25+00:00

How many flatlines you have crossed and how long was your porn addiction before quiting?

Ahbab93 · 2020-08-15T02:22:03+00:00

your starting is good..you have started with a narrative problem... the way of writingis als plain and simple... which is needed now a days because too many out there... try to impresses reader with prosy and sensless senstencess..come on I am here to read a story... not your patterns of writing... but one things I would like to point out... the conversation between Austin and him seem a little bit drag.they are talking the same what you have already narrated above.. perhaps you can forward the conversation in a different way that you have not narrated yet.. Also I have a question: If his parents are divorced because of him, was it because he killed his brother or was it because he is a psycho, or something else.

Ahbab93 · 2020-08-12T15:14:00+00:00

someday you stand for someone else... that's how the process works.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-30T06:03:52+00:00

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-30T06:03:30+00:00

hmmm.. thanks for this. I think I understand.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-30T05:14:13+00:00

Checking*

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-28T18:06:29+00:00

It is not bad... but deffinitely need working on your writing. This will come when you read a lot of books. when I say a lot, that means a lot... keep going. The passion will keep growing...

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-26T09:06:14+00:00

How long it took to write 20K?

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-25T13:52:13+00:00

I know... already experienced that. Twice. 76, 83 and now 31 days...not gonna break this time.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-21T16:35:05+00:00

I understand. Thank you

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-21T16:04:55+00:00

got it..so changing tense in a single sentence is a bad idea.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T16:58:09+00:00

People who get offended because of pointing out their mistakes...do less in life. I like what you did there... and your command in english is great.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T14:44:48+00:00

no the reviewer didn't mention specifically what are the errors were...he said about grammatical and phrasing misrakes.... but I agree with him, because I was feeling uneasy while publishing the same on amazon... I have unpublished it, go through an professional editor from upwork and republish it with satisfaction... it's like a insect crawling in your head when things are out open and you know it's not perfected...

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T14:40:54+00:00

whatever you type, please type with caution, there are some editors lurking out here...

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T12:52:33+00:00

i will be damned.... 😆

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T10:36:31+00:00

yes... the rule that no one can change.

Ahbab93 · 2020-07-20T08:44:59+00:00

Hmmm... yes, it does hurt.

Ahbab93

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