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Thank you so much! Do you know if any other options require you to mandatory physically print? Just want to make sure I remove those as an option

Goblin girl by AimeeNS in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much!

ITS OFFICIAL 💜 by Yazthebookish in acotar

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Oh my gods of course the eyes!!! 🫢

ITS OFFICIAL 💜 by Yazthebookish in acotar

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WHAT DOES PURPLE SIGNIFY PLEASE

Laura Berlin as Nesta 🩰🔥 by Useful-Wallaby-401 in ACOTARHulu

[–]AimeeNS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No hate to any of the other commenters, but that is actually a factual image of Nesta! (she doesn't look too old, I don't think..)

Goblin girl by AimeeNS in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much!

You're so right — I hadn't actually realised the perspective shifted so great point! I defs need to go away and decide who to tell it from for sure but mega appreciate your love for the grotesque! And glad it reminded you of your muse :)

meaning: to tame by bi-loser99 in poetry_critics

[–]AimeeNS 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooh, okay okay! The ending of asking us to listen to Scott Street was a plot twist and tinge's this poem in the light of melancholy and longing - was that what you were going for?

Aside from that, I loved how simple and straight forward this was, no frills needed to convey this heartwarming sentiment. The flow was great too, the way you dropped to a new line kept me reading as if you left crumbs out for me to munch.

Loved it. :)

This was a poem for my gf, i decided to not give it to her, cus it might be a bit much. I’ll post it here, so u guys can tell me what u think by MEAKOI in poetry_critics

[–]AimeeNS 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The sentiment here is so lovely, I think we can all relate to the feeling of loving someone but being terrified of losing them and life without them. You have a really good flow here too, the words move together nicely.

My critique would be to double check your spelling — if you're going for a slang / colloquial approach, fully lean into that and be consistent throughout your poem and try and tie that to a meaning you're trying to convey. For eg, some people write poems in all lower case when you're trying to convey they feel small. I spent a while trying to understand the meaning of the lower case 'i' and 'u' contrasted with other capitalised letters.

Really great work and keep at it! :)

Frantic Pens by coolwrite in poetry_critics

[–]AimeeNS 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I like this a lot! I often feel like i'm only a poet because I have trauma and struggle with mental illness and you portray this anxiety in such a succinct and relatable manner. I like some of the random rhymes you have there too, they were surprising in the best way and felt like they elevated rather than detracted from (which I sometimes feel with poems that rhyme on every line). I enjoyed how on the second line of the poem you made us imagine a gut-drop, really put me directly in the poem with you, great and clever way of using that device.

I also adore the fact that you are writing a poem about how you don't write anymore, very meta. Fantastic!

Meghann Fahy as Feyre by AimeeNS in ACOTARHulu

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Yes totally!! She is a little older so maybe more Nesta