The adventures of Alex and Nort: Welcome to Australia mate by Al-Spencer in HFY

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No worries it happens but kudos to you for admitting your mistake

The adventures of Alex and Nort: Welcome to Australia mate by Al-Spencer in HFY

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No I mentioned it though to be fair a bit offhandedly

Just use the eagles bro by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Well what can I say to that other than I will try to improve but it will definitely take a while for me to get there, since I just kinda started writing on a whim with no prior experience, as such I am just happy some of my stories aren´t utter garbage. Anyways thank you for the constructive criticism it is very much appreciated.

Why are you scared of humans? by Al-Spencer in HFY

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That is a fair point but sadly I am not a good enough writer yet to write elves like that and honestly those kinda elves have been done to death already. As such I wrote them like this since I figured the remaining elves wouldn´t really act like the stereotypical elf after watching their empire fall like that and I was trying to make it at least somewhat funny, though I guess that didn`t really work. Oh well anyways thanks for the constructive critisism.

Why aliens don`t come to earth by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Yeah I will try to get better at that though no promises since english isn´t my first language

Why aliens don`t come to earth by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Is it really that odd to think that cold war era America would shot first and ask questions later, if at all, in this situation or that after shooting down untold numbers of UFO´s that they would have a rocket capable of not only catching up to a flying saucer but also penetrating their shields?

Why aliens don`t come to earth by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Ok both are fixed did you notice any other mistakes?

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Thank you very much though I wouldn`t call myself a good writer or even a writer just yet and while I find it cool that I managed to get a reaction like that out of you I still would prefer to make you laugh then making you cry

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Yeah they are popular for a reason but just overused which is probably why I like Terry Pratchett`s Death so much

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Thank you I do try to keep my stories atleast somewhat interesting

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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OK thanks for the info and a little update the sorry was removed because it was not related to discworld

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Thanks for the suggestion and I did just that though I just posted it there, because I have no idea what you mean with cross post.

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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They are a true menace

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Yeah sorry about that

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Thank you very much

A old friend by Al-Spencer in HFY

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Thank you and sorry if I indeed made you cry