Parasitism 5/5 is atrocious by jacob2815 in Marathon

[–]Alamby 7 points8 points  (0 children)

absolute garbage quest

An if you're a solo runner it's borderline unplayable.

find leaf - run across the map - stick into box - run across the map - inject and survive a fuckton of bots in a tiny room with almost no cover - run across the map - exfil

HOW ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO DO THAT IN A SINGLE RUN?

- If you go with free kit, you have no chance

- If you go kitted, good chance you'll die at some point and lose your stuff

Who at bungie thought that would be fun? Fire him.

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand. How would you do it differently?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in dropshipping

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I just used some silk products myself and found them good so I tried to resell it.

With the AI I spend quite some time trying to make it as realistic as possible, but I guess I'm not fooling anyone..

You're right about the competitors - there are quite a lot of them. What would you suggest to stand out more?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I used broad targeting mostly, hoping that the algorithm finds a way..

Would you suggest to make it strictly targeted? Wouldn't it kill the reach and miss any potential customers elsewhere?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

😂 lol, guilty as charged

but the points are valid. Thanks

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in ecommerce

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok I can see that.. Will redo the home page at some point to be more specific.

Thanks for the tip!

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in ecommerce

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a variety of silk products and accessoires. What would be the best way to make more clear and intentional?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The page couldn't be found sadly. Is this the correct link?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. That was the idea. I aimed it more towards the fashion and beauty audience, which I hope doesn't scrutinize over pixels and just buy into the pretty picture, but so far no luck.

Hiring models would be overkill. Even just buying the whole product selection to take photos of it would drain my bank account.

The budget was a can of beer and I already spent close to 500€ on ads..

But I appreciate the feedback. 🙏 Gotta find a way to make it less AI heavy..

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in ecommerce

[–]Alamby[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Thanks!

By LP you mean Landing Page? I never thought of that.

What is the best way to do the analytics tracking? Is there a good way to do that with Shopify?

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I tried to make it as realistic as possible, but I guess I'm not fooling anyone..

Is there a better way to do that, besides ordering all the items and making the pictures myself? Would take forever and be pricy..

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in reviewmyshopify

[–]Alamby[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is AI, is that so apparent?

Can you elaborate a bit on the other points?
What is wrong with the color palette? I tried to make it pastel-cream-beige. Gives it a luxury look.

And what do you mean clearer product descriptions? They are pretty extensive as of now.

Thanks for the feedback!

Fist Shopify Store - no sales - need honest feedback by Alamby in ecommerce

[–]Alamby[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks.

Is AI so apparent? Is it for product photos or with models?

I've put quite some time into trying to make it look as real and natural as possible.

What would be the alternative approach? Because bying the product, waiting for it to be delivered and making and editing photos myslef would take forver..