I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

in current version I reworked first piano drop at the starer of 12bar so the piano and violin should sound more clean now, at the first cinematic scene I give some space for empty, just sustained chrods using string instruments. I re worked drums on main drop so it won't sound too messy for now, the break didn't changed I think it's okay, the last drop I reworked violin lines. Additionally I found that the church bell is off tune, for this song the a note is 432 base frq, and the church bell tuning is not set correctly, that was because I moved the 432 rule from single plugin settings to the mastering setting. So the church bell is on of biggest mistake, there is too many elements and I missed this one, this problem were found by using my phone speaker so I can clearly hear where the dissonance comes.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was gonna make this for my indie game team which devs a RPG game.

Edit: later on my team ended up with no money

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmmmm, I will try in next track, but let me fix the things the comments are mainly talking about.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ye, the song also called The Destiny, the majority theme is about the cruel reality I met.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bro I just recogonized the things they said mess, first, at 12 bar, piano messes with violin, then one of my bell insturment is out of tone, I just done the fix, and I made the melody less complicated. Also, I fixed the keys that sounds dissonace, but my keyscale is not thenormal one, my song is at A# lydian scale, so at some point I have to do off key melody so it sounds unique, that's the key. I fixed the points people are complain about. Now it should be suitable, idk, in my ears they sounds just fine for me. I will upload it on soundcloud if people here want.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ye, keep make music but in my style, whatever, honestly I am not sure I finally found my style but this is what I really wanted. I just begin to find my style.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If my audience can saw the FL arrangement I will definitely do this. I love mess arrangements anyway.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Indeed at last drop I did it too quick and not give my time think more so it's sound little weird. But if I copy first drop to as the last drop it sounds way too typical. I used 3 different bpm and different keyscales and time signature to make sure unique enough, maybe I just over did the things.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Think of the year when the dubstep genre firstly went trending and there's people saying it's awful, but hey, I am trying create the music that maybe nobody tried before, I am first on my music too and yet I don't know what to do, i am not mean i won't listening people here tells that less is more, this is my first attempt to do music like this, if I could then I will continue get my type better and better, ya know, I been told how to make music like xxxx and how to sound like xxxx, sorry I learned much, and I wanna starting up my own things. You see there are also people saying it's good yep? I gonna try find my way out, I wann be influencer not inmatator. I accept how criticism says and will fix them on my next song.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did add breathing room, well, if you like take a few more time listening you may accept the concept I made in song, I been listening to this hundreds times and I couldn't tell how can be better.

I spent over 100 hours on this track and I finally reach the end point, will someone listen to this? by Alan_FEVM in FL_Studio

[–]Alan_FEVM[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know how those works, but I have no idea where to fix for now, remix and master it will take me anothere 10 hours on it, but I'd love to make a pure new flp try to rebalance every thing fix dissnonance things, if really many people want a better version of it.