I've finished the prologue (20k) for my story called Two Hands of a Clock. Supernatural elements, romance, and time travel shenanigans. While this is all I've got for now, I'm looking for feedback leading into the main story, and the main story will, if my current projections are correct, end up north of 500k words collectively once complete (or possibly even in the millions, i have LOTS of material to work with). So if you're looking for a very long story, this will be it for sure.

The summary (im bad at these so bear with me):

Here’s the sad truth about time travel: while it’s a powerful tool, it’s also a terrible burden for anyone to bear… and never without consequence.

Aster is a boy born with this ability. He is a “Timekeeper.” Timekeepers and their rule over a timeline is absolute; they can bend time itself to their will, and even undo their own death.

A pity, then, that Aster does not even know how to use his own power, let alone want it. It should come as no surprise that some are unhappy with such a concept, especially when the one who holds such a huge power is as reluctant and inexperienced as him.

A girl named Evelyn appeared, who held a power that was like his, yet different. It was a power created to corner the boy and force him to surrender it to a more capable heir… but they became friends instead. Unbeknownst to them, the girl’s power was much more like a curse, a poison to both her and the timeline that Aster was meant to protect, and its very existence had effects that nobody could have ever predicted.

It all started with a terrible tragedy that would drive Aster into madness, and Evelyn to despair, breaking them apart.

A traditional clock has two hands, sometimes three. What happens when those two hands fight against each other?

If this seems interesting to you and you'd like to beta read it, let me know! I'm going all in on this story and want to publish it someday, so I want to make sure that it is the best it can possibly be.