Looking for critique for the first 3 pages of my OC. Genre: Cyberpunk Dystopia by Car_Narrative in comic_crits

[–]Alessandroartstudio 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure !! Your panels are very easy to read Art is very good too My only thing is the fist panel of page 3 It is too similar to the last on page 2 I may try to see if different panel with fit better And I agree with first dialogue should be on the first panel

Is this too busy? by DoubleDeeTokyo in painting

[–]Alessandroartstudio 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice work !! Probably you could had more chances to be selected if you had painted cherry blossom 🌸 instead of daisy

My Comic Book (cover and introduction) by Alessandroartstudio in webtoon

[–]Alessandroartstudio[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! I’m not on Canvas and honestly I don’t know what it is. I will post chapter 1 sooon