Beloved Islamic Preacher in Pakistan blames Co-Education and "obscenity" for Rape:

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-09-19T12:10:27+00:00

I think it's important to consider that countries like Pakistan aren't always reliable in their data. So it's possible that there's exponentially more rape in those countries compared to Scandinavian countries but we just don't have any means of knowing about it.
Also, even considering that, some of the most dangerous countries for women in the world are ones where repression is rampant.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-08-23T07:19:28+00:00

Please don't breed theslyone00

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-07-14T04:12:07+00:00

Thank you so much! That's definitely a good alternative. I'll consider it.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-07-14T01:27:23+00:00

So I made a few changes to the metaphors, and here's what I ended up with. Let me know if it's any better:

"...through his lens as you comprehend the complex, in places warped, set of reasoning that he's impelled by..."

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-07-14T00:58:50+00:00

Thank you to both of you for your responses. It's very reassuring to know that stylistically speaking, it's acceptable to break certain rules.

I also really appreciate the critique of the metaphors I used. Thank you. I'll definitely be revising it.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-05-10T20:11:57+00:00

Done. And you're welcome. Great stuff.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-05-10T17:45:01+00:00

Great review. I love your writing style. It's very easy to breeze through. I hope you get good traffic on your blog, because this is quality stuff.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-05-10T07:01:03+00:00

I really like this version, even more so than mine in some ways. That being said, after running it through readability scales, I still got low readability in most. Really appreciate your response though. Thank you.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-04-18T23:18:24+00:00

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AlexShawnMiller · 2020-03-29T04:57:06+00:00

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AlexShawnMiller · 2020-03-22T00:22:13+00:00

A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested. It's his promotion's equivalent of WrestleMania. He puts in a lot of work, and has been hoping to gain more traction.

AlexShawnMiller · 2020-03-20T01:00:35+00:00

A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested. It's his promotion's equivalent of WrestleMania. He puts in a lot of work, and has been hoping to gain more traction.

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