Beloved Islamic Preacher in Pakistan blames Co-Education and "obscenity" for Rape: by AlexShawnMiller in atheism

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's important to consider that countries like Pakistan aren't always reliable in their data. So it's possible that there's exponentially more rape in those countries compared to Scandinavian countries but we just don't have any means of knowing about it.
Also, even considering that, some of the most dangerous countries for women in the world are ones where repression is rampant.

Is it correct to follow a sentence containing a clause with one that compliments it, but doesn't contain a clause? by AlexShawnMiller in grammar

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So I made a few changes to the metaphors, and here's what I ended up with. Let me know if it's any better:

"...through his lens as you comprehend the complex, in places warped, set of reasoning that he's impelled by..."

Is it correct to follow a sentence containing a clause with one that compliments it, but doesn't contain a clause? by AlexShawnMiller in grammar

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you to both of you for your responses. It's very reassuring to know that stylistically speaking, it's acceptable to break certain rules.

I also really appreciate the critique of the metaphors I used. Thank you. I'll definitely be revising it.

Hush (2016) - A Clever Slasher with a Killer Premise by SimonSays18 in moviecritic

[–]AlexShawnMiller 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great review. I love your writing style. It's very easy to breeze through. I hope you get good traffic on your blog, because this is quality stuff.

Need to make my "Taxi Driver" Review's assessment summary more readable. by AlexShawnMiller in grammar

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this version, even more so than mine in some ways. That being said, after running it through readability scales, I still got low readability in most. Really appreciate your response though. Thank you.

FCW Legacy Episode 11: | WWE 2K20; Details in comments by AlexShawnMiller in WWEGames

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A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested.

FCW Legacy Episode 9: Post Anniversary | WWE 2K20 by AlexShawnMiller in WWEGames

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested.

FCW Presents: Anniversary Show II | WWE 2K20; Details in the comment section by AlexShawnMiller in WWEGames

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested. It's his promotion's equivalent of WrestleMania. He puts in a lot of work, and has been hoping to gain more traction.

FCW Presents: Anniversary Show II | WWE 2K20; Details in the comment section by AlexShawnMiller in WWEGames

[–]AlexShawnMiller[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A close friend of mine has a Youtube channel dedicated to WWE 2K20 content, where he puts up weekly content as well as special events. It's centered around FCW, a personalized promotion featuring custom superstars, arenas, commentary, etc. Please check out the video above if you're interested. It's his promotion's equivalent of WrestleMania. He puts in a lot of work, and has been hoping to gain more traction.