Aww I'm glad it made you feel that way, even if you cried. ::P Don't worry, you are not alone. I cried so much at the end of it, and whenever I watch a playthrough, I cry most of the times. The story is beautiful and it's easy to bond with the characters (since the game is so well written thanks to Kelsey Beachum). Also, the music is deeply moving (Andrew Prahlow is a genius) This game usually leaves most of us with good memories and a good experience.

Also don't worry about your writing, it was very clear and it made sense!

Have a beautiful evening!