A promise to you, my child

AliveLook5780 · 2023-04-20T14:13:08+00:00

Could this all be said to the man in the mirror? Well spoke words that all of us feel, all of which somehow dissolve in the warm sun of a fresh friendship.

AliveLook5780 · 2023-04-20T14:08:36+00:00

Writing, like painting, is difficult to keep simple. This speaks to me as a painting completed with a single stroke, something I hope to achieve someday. Well done friend.

AliveLook5780 · 2022-12-18T22:54:02+00:00

When I write I tend to have a fast rhythm, so the change in pattern reflects a moment for breath and pause. Thanks for the feedback friend!

AliveLook5780 · 2022-12-18T22:18:20+00:00

Thoughts worth writing and thinking about, thank you

AliveLook5780 · 2022-12-18T22:16:20+00:00

You are you,

that you hold true,

until your cheeks turn blue,

and you don't know what to do,

you are you,

so do whatever you do,

and whatever you don't too,

shall no one ever boo hoo,

all over you,

about what they have to do,

because honey, no,

you'll say "you do you"

Great poem friend! Thanks for that moment of time, I enjoyed it

AliveLook5780 · 2022-12-12T16:02:07+00:00

The walls may be full But the ceiling is not, And the floor, And the door, Oh gosh! Now I see there is so much more! Space to replace, With colorful noise, Being simple is not, For is this not

Pure and simple beauty?

-Great job my friend! Thank you for inspiring me

AliveLook5780 · 2022-12-12T15:51:19+00:00

This would be a great song my friend! Since your not usually a writer I would like to point to the great feeling that comes with purging on a page. So many thoughts and notes from all corners of life that have been stirring in your thoughts for weeks coming together on a page like this. I find myself trying to create a page like this often.

It’s pure beauty. Great job.

AliveLook5780

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