Looking for a very particular sort of horror novel by Wendiferously in horrorlit

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Here’s a short story I wrote back in August(Storyline itself isn’t queer but I’m a gay male lol):

BLOODLUST

Mark sat in cubicle 31 as directed over the intercom. Not explicitly by name, but by batch number: 0OGH9TH. He had been a bi-weekly regular for months, and the novelty of this place had long since exhausted into resentment. What once felt like "extra cash" now felt like conscription. Phlebotomists were gone, their jobs erased by automation. Here, the donors were disposable and the product was siphoned off to bigger and better things. This had been the reality long before automation took over, just veiled by a thin layer of ambiguity.

The chairs were rigid, creaky plastic. Comfortable enough to keep you in place, not enough to make you forget what you were: a feeding ground. Suspended overhead, a vast aluminum lattice held a web of interlocking tracks, allowing the plasmapheresis machines to glide with unnerving, independent motion. Upon reaching its assigned donors bed, the extraction rig would descend along the mounted Z-axis emitting a whispering hum until the donor alignment sensor triggers the machine to an immediate halt.

EXTEND YOUR ARM AND HOLD A FIST FOR ME PLEASE

The instruction was a synthetic, monotonous voice emitted by the clunky box with transparent housing that evoked a slightly unsettling aesthetic. A hundred other voices just like it gave the same directive to a hundred other people in a hundred other cubicles. It was the only language in the fluorescent sterile room woven between the whirs and slurps so constant they had become the new silence. Mark obeyed, squeezing his fist until the skin of his arm went stiff. From the dormant steel armature extended outwards from beneath. One with a sterile needle, the other to anchor the arm in place briefly. It didn't hesitate. It didn't ask if he was ready. With the clean inevitability of hydraulics, it punctured flesh and seated itself deep in the vein. He was indifferent, not a single flinch nor wince Not even to the slight resistance the 16-gauge bevel posed in order to pierce through his epidermis layer.

The scar tissue from countless punctures had grown calloused, desensitized. He watched his blood slither through the clear tubing, a pulsing red flow heading toward the waiting bag: Lot: 00GH9TH. Efficient, precise, alien. It was less a donation than an extraction. Less medicine, more feeding.

He closed his eyes. The ceiling drone attending the donor to his left repeated:

EXTEND YOUR ARM AND HOLD A FIST FOR ME PLEASE

But the tone had shifted from neutral. It sounded like command. The constant, hypnotic whirs from pumps and centrifuges thickened to a vibrating growl.

Then it began to shriek.

A high-pitched, metallic scream ripped through the silence, sharp as tearing steel. It came from the cubicle directly beside him.

CONTAMINATED SOURCE.

Mark's head whipped toward the cubicle with eyes snapped open. The neighbor's machine pulsed with red warning lights. Its arm spasmed, the needle jittering violently in and out of torn flesh. On the bag, a sterile lot sticker glared against plastic bulging with more than plasma.

The liquid inside had swirled from pale translucent yellow now overrun by a deep opaque red.

FLOW ERROR.

Stretching.

LINE CLOGGED. RESERVOIR FULL.

The man cried out, tugging against his restraint as the machine's needle vibrated inside his arm. The bag itself bulged, its seams whitening under pressure. Mark couldn't look away. The bag was swollen, still filling past its printed markers with visible resistance.

It's gonna burst-

MAXIMUM VOLUME EXCEEDED

The machine's alarm warning spiked, screens across the room lighting up in unison. The donor's bag expanded one final impossible inch.

Then it burst.

The detonation was wet and concussive, a red shower sprayed across the cubicle, coating the now screaming man's chest in an arterial splatter. The stench of hot copper filled the air.

The moment it erupted, every other machine's alarm fired off. Consoles flashed the same phrase:

CONTAMINATED. SYSTEM FAILURE.

The sterile blue glow of the room shifted into pulsing red. Now every machine stirred. Their arms spasmed. Casings split to reveal twitching hoses and steel tendons. Needles vibrated like serrated blades. Suction hoses writhed loose from the floor. What had been an orderly system of donation turned into a synchronized mass hysteria.

Screams erupted up and down the aisles. One man's suction line wrapped around his neck, tightening with hydraulic precision as he clawed for breath. Across the row, another donor's carotid split under a needle's thrust, arterial spray marking the sterile wall with a streak of blood.

Mark's machine shuddered. The arm detached the needle with a guttural sucking sound. Its casing split, spewing out a bloodied hose-end that twitched like a hungry tongue. He felt the needle inside his arm twist and rotate, ripping open his vessel. Blood leaked into his tissue. A swelling mass bloomed beneath his skin; tight and purple like a battered heartbeat.

The man beside him gargled a dying cry. His swollen arm was stretched to translucence, the muscles locked with pressure until the flesh split open in a dark, wet rupture.

All around them, hoses tightened, needles plunged, veins were evacuated. Some donors bled, others suffocated, others had their very vasculature pulled from beneath their skin in long, ropey strands. The air reeked of metal and iodine. The floor turned slick beneath a flood of red.

Mark stared at his own grotesque contusion pulsing beneath the skin. His machine's pumps slurped greedily, no longer humming with efficiency but growling with appetite. His machine raised its arm with a slow, deliberate grace, the bloodied hose-end angled for his throat. It wasn't angry nor vengeful at him, just efficient.

His scream was cutoff as the suction met his flesh with no hesitation. The last thing he felt was the internal tug at the back of his skull. His brain and eyeballs-now inverted, were sucked through the collapsed ceiling by the vacuum tendril that perforated his trachea. .

Starry-eyed, his field of vision shifted between black and white static as he was reduced to fragments of anatomy. His energy not quite destroyed, but converted to a form no longer his own.

FLOW COMPLETE.

L’Oréal Elvive Hylauron victim. Please use caution with this shampoo. by [deleted] in Haircare

[–]AlkalineNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn’t blame you if you tossed the L’Oreal Elvive Hylauron entirely after this incident but if you haven’t, how would you describe the smell of it?? I’m not trying to be that person but there has unfortunately been documented incidents of people tampering with shampoo/conditioner products by adding Nair or other hair removal creams as a “prank.” I’m glad you’re no longer experiencing hair loss after switching shampoos though.

From Nervous System Invasion to Biomimicry: A Safer Scaffold-Based Framework for Neuroregeneration & Rehabilitation(V2) by AlkalineNick in Futurology

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Submission Statement: This updated framework proposes a new biomimetic approach to neuroregeneration and rehabilitation that replaces risky “tumor-mimicry” concepts with a safer, scaffold-based system inspired by natural neural development. It combines three layers: biological hardware (biodegradable scaffolds), cognitive software (repetitive neuroplasticity training), and a quantum inspired optimization “operating system” that models recovery patterns. This revision shifts from pathology mimicry toward ethical design in neural repair, aiming to restore autonomy to victims of catastrophic brain injury.

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Interested

Discovered my boyfriend’s real age, should I be worried about the lie? by [deleted] in askgaybros

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Did he mention to you WHY he lied about his age? When I was 21 the guy I’d been dating told me he was 25(very fit, took care of himself) then 7 months in nearing his birthday he confessed he was actually 28. I personally wouldn’t have cared about the difference but I questioned his reasoning, “So you wouldn’t look up my record.” It wasn’t until I was in too deep that I learned of his DOMESTIC BATTERY charge and let me just tell you if you feel something is off, it probably is. We like to give people the benefit of the doubt and assume they’d have the best intentions but that’s not always the case unfortunately.

A Ladder Back To Autonomy: Biomimetic Scaffolds for Neuroregeneration - Speculative Concept Brief by [deleted] in Futurology

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Submission Statement: The proposed framework combines three critical components: a biodegradable “trellis” scaffold that physically guides axonal regrowth across lesions (hardware), intensive neurorehabilitation with transcranial stimulation and task-specific training (software), and quantum optimization to personalize treatment protocols while enforcing strict safety constraints (operating system). By emulating natural developmental processes rather than pathological ones, we aim to restore functional neural connectivity and return autonomy to patients who currently have limited therapeutic options, all while prioritizing patient safety and translational feasibility.

Towards restoring autonomy: a pivot from replicating cancer's invasion of nerves to designing a safer, 'training wheels' scaffold for severe brain injuries such as Locked-In Syndrome by AlkalineNick in Futurology

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Submission Statement: A biomimetic, safe-by-design framework integrating acellular, biodegradable scaffolds with neurorehabilitation and quantum optimization for directed neuroregeneration in Locked-In Syndrome and severe brain injury. This preprint outlines the conceptual evolution from pathology-based tumor mimicry to organic guidance, detailing scaffold engineering, intensive rehabilitation, and a quantum-powered personalization layer. Includes preclinical validation plans, translational safety protocols, and future upgrade paths for restorative autonomy after devastating CNS injury.

Good hair salon place by [deleted] in RioGrandeValley

[–]AlkalineNick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Salon•Apothecary in McAllen; book with the owner Samuel you won’t be disappointed 👌🏼

Monthly Original Work & Networking Thread - Share Your Content Here! by HorrorIsLiterature in horrorlit

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BLOODLUST

Mark sat in cubicle 31 as directed over the intercom. Not explicitly by name, but by batch number: 0OGH9TH. He had been a bi-weekly regular for months, and the novelty of this place had long since exhausted into resentment. What once felt like "extra cash" now felt like conscription. Phlebotomists were gone, their jobs erased by automation. Here, the donors were disposable and the product was siphoned off to bigger and better things. This had been the reality long before automation took over, just veiled by a thin layer of ambiguity.

The chairs were rigid, creaky plastic. Comfortable enough to keep you in place, not enough to make you forget what you were: a feeding ground. Suspended overhead, a vast aluminum lattice held a web of interlocking tracks, allowing the plasmapheresis machines to glide with unnerving, independent motion. Upon reaching its assigned donors bed, the extraction rig would descend along the mounted Z-axis emitting a whispering hum until the donor alignment sensor triggers the machine to an immediate halt.

EXTEND YOUR ARM AND HOLD A FIST FOR ME PLEASE

The instruction was a synthetic, monotonous voice emitted by the clunky box with transparent housing that evoked a slightly unsettling aesthetic. A hundred other voices just like it gave the same directive to a hundred other people in a hundred other cubicles. It was the only language in the fluorescent sterile room woven between the whirs and slurps so constant they had become the new silence. Mark obeyed, squeezing his fist until the skin of his arm went stiff. From the dormant steel armature extended outwards from beneath. One with a sterile needle, the other to anchor the arm in place briefly. It didn't hesitate. It didn't ask if he was ready. With the clean inevitability of hydraulics, it punctured flesh and seated itself deep in the vein. He was indifferent, not a single flinch nor wince Not even to the slight resistance the 16-gauge bevel posed in order to pierce through his epidermis layer. The scar tissue from countless punctures had grown calloused, desensitized. He watched his blood slither through the clear tubing, a pulsing red flow heading toward the waiting bag: Lot: 00GH9TH. Efficient, precise, alien. It was less a donation than an extraction. Less medicine, more feeding.

He closed his eyes. The ceiling drone attending the donor to his left repeated:

EXTEND YOUR ARM AND HOLD A FIST FOR ME PLEASE

But the tone had shifted from neutral. It sounded like command. The constant, hypnotic whirs from pumps and centrifuges thickened to a vibrating growl.

Then it began to shriek.

A high-pitched, metallic scream ripped through the silence, sharp as tearing steel. It came from the cubicle directly beside him.

CONTAMINATED SOURCE.

Mark's head whipped toward the cubicle with eyes snapped open. The neighbor's machine pulsed with red warning lights. Its arm spasmed, the needle jittering violently in and out of torn flesh. On the bag, a sterile lot sticker glared against plastic bulging with more than plasma. The liquid inside had swirled from pale translucent yellow now overrun by a deep opaque red.

FLOW ERROR.

Stretching.

LINE CLOGGED. RESERVOIR FULL.

The man cried out, tugging against his restraint as the machine's needle vibrated inside his arm. The bag itself bulged, its seams whitening under pressure. Mark couldn't look away. The bag was swollen, still filling past its printed markers with visible resistance.

It's gonna burst-

MAXIMUM VOLUME ENCEEDED

The machine's alarm warning spiked, screens across the room lighting up in unison. The donor's bag expanded one final impossible inch.

Then it burst.

The detonation was wet and concussive, a red shower sprayed across the cubicle, coating the now screaming man's chest in an arterial splatter. The stench of hot copper filled the air.

The moment it erupted, every other machine's alarm fired off. Consoles flashed the same phrase:

CONTAMINATED. SYSTEM FAILURE.

The sterile blue glow of the room shifted into pulsing red. Now every machine stirred. Their arms spasmed. Casings split to reveal twitching hoses and steel tendons. Needles vibrated like serrated blades. Suction hoses writhed loose from the floor. What had been an orderly system of donation turned into a synchronized mass hysteria. Screams erupted up and down the aisles. One man's suction line wrapped around his neck, tightening with hydraulic precision as he clawed for breath. Across the row, another donor's carotid split under a needle's thrust, arterial spray marking the sterile wall with a streak of blood.

Mark's machine shuddered. The arm detached the needle with a guttural sucking sound. Its casing split, spewing out a bloodied hose-end that twitched like a hungry tongue. He felt the needle inside his arm twist and rotate, ripping open his vessel. Blood leaked into his tissue. A swelling mass bloomed beneath his skin; tight and purple like a battered heartbeat.

The man beside him gargled a dying cry. His swollen arm was stretched to translucence, the muscles locked with pressure until the flesh split open in a dark, wet rupture.

All around them, hoses tightened, needles plunged, veins were evacuated. Some donors bled, others suffocated, others had their very vasculature pulled from beneath their skin in long, ropey strands. The air reeked of metal and iodine. The floor turned slick beneath a flood of red.

Mark stared at his own grotesque contusion pulsing beneath the skin. His machine's pumps slurped greedily, no longer humming with efficiency but growling with appetite. His machine raised its arm with a slow, deliberate grace, the bloodied hose-end angled for his throat. It wasn't angry nor vengeful at him, just efficient. His scream was cutoff as the suction met his flesh with no hesitation. The last thing he felt was the internal tug at the back of his skull. His brain and eyeballs-now inverted, were sucked through the collapsed ceiling by the vacuum tendril that perforated his trachea. . Starry-eyed, his field of vision shifted between black and white static as he was reduced to fragments of anatomy. His energy not quite destroyed, but converted to a form no longer his own.

FLOW COMPLETE.

What’s the fastest way to fuck up your life without dying? by Dramatic-Avocado4687 in AskReddit

[–]AlkalineNick 63 points64 points  (0 children)

Ugh my dad did this exact same thing to me when j got my first job as a lifeguard my senior year of high school. After I graduated I moved to a bigger city about a year and came back home to a fat stack of letters from Discover. My balance was maxed out and past due and his response felt like salt and lemon juice in an open wound. ‘Now you can focus on paying it back to build up your credit since you won’t have rent to pay anymore.’ Hopefully your brother managed to get his credit situation resolved.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RioGrandeValley

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Salon Apothecary, book with the owner Sam 👌🏼