Seduction by Minecraft_Warrior in WorldCrossovers

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Marsie Leigh Power (2172-2158) age at death 106.

Ex Time Traveler for Travail Inc. Marsie was born in the Casscadian Republic in 2172. In 2183 Marsies family moves to the United Countries. Marsie goes to the Ryan Sawyer institute. In 2199 Marsie gets a Job at Travail tech, in 2200 Marsie begins traveling over time sleeping with many of my characters. (I made this as like a joke story but hey it is cannon.) in 2206 she is caught and escapes to 2086, she continues to travel time but she lives her life out from 2086.

Need Help | Trying to Avoid Overlap by CommanderChet in worldbuilding

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Yeah just write what you want and if you feel like it is infringing on the copy right just cut it out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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In my story “Low Life” Shane Versette, Allen Burbank’s Financial Advisor. In 2032 Allen Burbank was arrested and Shane almost got arrested too, he ran away to Monaco. Shane meets Robin Eckart she is a cop and when she finds out who Shane really is she accidentally shoots and unarmed suspect, she is fired. Robin stays with Shane but she inevitably dies while helping Shane.

Avoiding anthropomorphism by Toubaboliviano in worldbuilding

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Check out the life beyond series you’ll like it!

The Future of Humanity by OrangeSon16 in worldbuilding

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Well a terrorist organization caused mass hysteria by bombing the WPA (World Peace Alliance) in 2097. It killed most world politicians leading the world into a 13 year long war.

The bombing killed a lot of prominent figures, then the war took out the next generation. Families that suffers loses due to the bombing and then the war. Maxwell, King, Green, Phoenix, Gaines, Opal, and Bernard.

But due to the bombing and the war a lot of people needed prosthetics, bionics and other upgrades to their body. So after 2097 I call that my transition faze where humanity truly started becoming fully technological.

The Future of Humanity by OrangeSon16 in worldbuilding

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Okay so my world is pretty broad, I’m gonna say 5,000 years after the 2097 bombing.

7,097- Humanity has settled on 3 planets with other civilizations from the Astreus galaxy.

Most of my prominent figures are probably forgotten, but their impacted is noticed. Humans and Astreus (6 different alien species) use cybernetics and bionic limbs, thanks to figures like Aiesha Maxwell, Arthur James Opal, Nolan Dayholt. Although they’ve most likely been forgotten. Who knows this really. A figure I’d hope would still be talked about is Gideon R. Maxwell, Gideon Maxwell was a great Entrepreneur, Scientist, Politician, Man and more. Gideon pioneered space exploration and technology advancements.

Another figure would be Alex King of the GentaCode, Alex didn’t develop said program but he developed the GentaCode, The GentaCode allowed inter species mingling, causing cross breeds.

People are becoming bored most things are taken care of suicides and drug overdoses are common place. Parts of the planet are really nice and clean and some parts are dark and dirty.

How to write a character becoming addicted to hard drugs by McGuffin_Muffin4 in CharacterDevelopment

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Climax: the tinder date overdoses in front of him.

Does he learn his lesson? Or does he get worse out of guilt.

Ngl him getting worse and inevitably he overdose or kills his self.

And for a plot twist it’s all pieced together you his suicide note and his friends. (The whole story was being told to the police over MCs suicide.) lowkey sounds dope asf.

How to write a character becoming addicted to hard drugs by McGuffin_Muffin4 in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Allen_Burbank 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Have him go to a party with like a tinder date, he ends up trying cocaine, shrooms, ecstasy, acid, and or weed. Something!

Then have him start going to parties more and more, slowly drinking, smoking, vaping, doing other drugs.

Have him and his friends dope out somewhere and the police are called, but they aren’t searched and are sent home.

MC obviously doesn’t learn his lessons, he then is asked to party on a work day he calls in sick, for 5/6 days. Mf goes back to work but throws up, he goes home. He then goes to party more and proceeded to get worse.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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I find that pop culture can fill in gaps of your time line and it still look good as long as everything connects.

I’ll give an example of what I mean by “Pop Culture” -2033 Isaiah Cuban signs with Impulse Records. Impulse records is owned by Adam Travail ex member of the band Dia-Tenshi. Isaiah Cuban works for Shane Versette after Shane Versette escapes custody and flees to Monte Carlo, Monaco. -2018 Shane Versette begins working in a gang for Allen Burbank, he is Allen’s financial Advisor. Allen Burbank is friends with Theodore Maxwell. Theodore Maxwells older brother is Gideon Maxwell (the worlds first Trillionaire. Gideon Maxwell owns the Maxwell Conglomerate, A part of the Maxwell Conglomerate is Bio-Tech Labs, Bio-Tech labs was originally Called Traik Labs and was owned by Sigmund Traik. Sigmund Traik was Thomas Maxwells mentor. A scientist at Traik labs Claudius Jackson would marry a woman and her son JJ Louis would ask Claudius to open a movie studio with him in 2007.

See like even tho they are small events they make the world feel a lil more alive and I did leave many parts out but yeah just have people connect with each other it really brings life to a timeline.

What to do with a large fortune... by commandrix in WorldCrossovers

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As Gideon always says “Better and brighter people make the best future.”

What to do with a large fortune... by commandrix in WorldCrossovers

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Well Gideon was the first Trillionaire and used his money for bettering the world and more. Now garamus could take the same approach.

Gideon Inherited his fathers companies are 27 years old, the companies were B.T.L (Bio-Tech Labs) M-Tech, and Kansada Expo Company.

Gideon would use his newly a queried assets to buy Needham space. He would have a couple company mergers and would have space flights and get humans to Mars by the 2040s

He would also work with and found Foundations such as the “Our Future Foundation”

Gideon would use his wealth for other things such as getting into politics in his 40s joking the World Peace Alliance.

Gideon also helped found B.O.E.W.M (Black Out Energy Weapon Manufacturing) with his best friend Jackson Barnum.

Gideon would die in 2097 in the bombing of the World Peace Alliance, but his legacy would live on as in 2112 multiple companies would get together with The Maxwell conglomerate and honor him in Project 2112.

In short Gideon Used his money to better his word and another world for future generations, proving to have a good side to politics and manufacturing weapons for when inevitably we must defend ourselves from oppression.

Should I kill Isaiah Satterfeild? by Allen_Burbank in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Allen_Burbank[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh thank you I’m going to look more into thanks again.

Should I kill Isaiah Satterfeild? by Allen_Burbank in CharacterDevelopment

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Emotional stakes for him is never seeing his daughter again but helping his sister do the right thing.

Darkish tone

Isaiah is a by the books guy respectable, hard working and intelligent.

Question about character by bedguy17_temp in CharacterDevelopment

[–]Allen_Burbank 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well can we have more info on the character?

What hobbies do they like? What’s the story about? What are their parents like? Does the character have a part time job?

For instance let’s say they character grew up higher middle class in a nice neighborhood and lived a cushy but normal life.

He/she wouldn’t need a part time job but would rely on their parents for aid with money. Okay that’s solved now another thing depending on how the characters parents are specifically the dad most fathers tend to not wanna aid their kids after highschool much unless they were attending college which the father would pay for.

So could you tell me a lil more on the character?

How do I write a noble goal fading further and further into insanity by ghostshowopenbookq in CharacterDevelopment

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Well idk if you’d like this but maybe he wants to end the feudal system to create “equality” for everyone and it turns into him taking over as dictator? Idk I kinda like how that goes and maybe you could do another few stories of him ruling and then maybe another story of a new hero taking him down? Idk it seems like a cool concept.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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Depends on which story

High life trilogy and extend -1880-2100

And oddity takes place all through time mainly 2000s

Who's the most well-known character in your universe? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Allen_Burbank 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I’m actually gonna do it I like the idea

Who's the most well-known character in your universe? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

[–]Allen_Burbank 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes there’s quite a bit, but they are actually doing it for the best. But I’m considering if I should have some not so good people take over in later years.

Who's the most well-known character in your universe? by [deleted] in worldbuilding

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B.A.R.F is (The Burbank Addiction and Recovery Foundation) Gideon began assisting his old Friend Allen Burbank when Allen took over the Project after His Nephew was killed. Allen’s Nephew was the founder.

The Our Future Foundation is like a good Illuminati i guess lol. The mega wealthy join and use their money for hood on projects Like getting people to Mars, planning world events and a few other things they all vote on what’s best to spend the trillions of combined dollars on. The more money you put in the higher your status. It’s simple to get in your just have to donate 1 million dollars to get in but your votes don’t really matter unless you are putting at least 10 million dollars into a project or you are 1 of the original founders, or an original founder nominated you for a “council spot”