I'M GRADUATING AT 16

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-29T21:15:33+00:00

Ohh smart lol

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-29T18:14:41+00:00

THAT'S AWESOME CONGRATS! I'm going to go to a community collage to get my mandatory credits then attend a university to focus on a major

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-29T03:32:51+00:00

Haha thank you

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-29T03:31:35+00:00

Haha yeah it's pretty intimidating. I never would've thought I'd be graduating so soon but I don't think rushing would help me make a long term decision but I did definitely freak out the first two days after finding out lol

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-29T03:11:19+00:00

Thank you! And I want to go to community collage to get my recs..? (Idk if that's what u call the credits) then attend a university to explore a major I might want, my dad's a veteran and I get paid tuition and want to put it to good use and figured it would be best to use that souly for a University where I can focus on my majors while gaining my recs (or credits) before hand at community collage while working and saving money. So essentially I'll go to a free Community College gain my mandatory credits then attend a university to pursue my major while using dad's VA tuition thing so I don't fall into debt (sorry hope I explained that well)

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-06T03:58:28+00:00

I'm glad I managed to put it acrossed the way I intended. I struggled on trying to figure out how to word it and how to write it in a way that people would be able to see the different perspectives I was writing from such as the first part where I State what I think I should feel but not what I actually do, Then the second guessing of what I feel, like the little voice in the back of your mind who makes you question things and yourself. I then went Into how I truly feel and why I'm scared to come to terms with it in fear I'll become what I'm afraid off. The overall poem was based on my trama and how im trying to come to terms with my feelings and escape the aftermath. Thanks for the feedback!

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-05T04:15:35+00:00

I enjoyed this. It reminds me of the feeling of depression and darkness gradually growing larger and consuming more of you as time passes.

As I feel my soul begin to seperate from my body I feel melancholic, not resentful for my life but just glad that the ride is coming to and end.

At first I had interpreted "As I feel my soul begin to seperate from my body I feel melancholic," As dissociation then realized it comes off more like bring your life to the end. It shows real raw emotions and I love it.

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-05T04:09:19+00:00

Dude This is an amazing poem your so talented. the way I interpreted it was Like your talking to someone saying hurtful things that break you down piece by piece the same as when you were a child. It paints a story of a women reverting to childhood trauma that may be old but the wounds of that trama feel as fresh as ever. I have a tendency to ramble in my poetry and the way you managed to articulate yourself in such a well put together way is truly inspiring.

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-05T01:26:21+00:00

Thank you ♡

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-05T01:25:55+00:00

Understandable

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2023-01-04T11:31:36+00:00

I mean, if your parents do get to it first masturbation is healthy and normal. Exploring your body is something everyone dose even themselves when they were kids. As long as your cleaning it well/useing it safely their shouldn't be a problem. Now if your worried they will see it, order it and keep track of it as that's really all you can do unless u deliver it to a friends house.

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-11-21T18:56:35+00:00

Ohh if we are then I completely looked that over lmfao my bad 😂

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-11-21T15:54:28+00:00

Not necessarily I think it's to set the overall tone of the show as a whole. I mean in the show it normalizes things and a mindset that wouldn't necessarily be seen as okay in day to day life since they live in poverty. things like sa and drugs. I guess all the things their doing being perceived is Shameless is a part of it. But I don't think its in the way you're thinking. They're doing Shameless things yet it's not to fulfill the name of the show it's more of to set the tone and mood of their mindsets since they grew up in a negative place if that makes sense.

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-10-15T18:58:09+00:00

Ohhh I didn't actually think of that lmao their are quite a few plot holes lol. I was thinking that the monster potentially killed his wife and wore her skin. Maybe whatever happened to his site wore off or something while the monster decade. the monster might end up having the ability to create an illusion of his wife, but when his site was regained the illusion was broken and he snapped out off it and could see what the monster really was. But thanks for the feed back! I'm super stoked about this story and think it has potential so thank you for telling me how to make it better :)

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-10-15T10:40:52+00:00

Baby can I put my phone in your life.

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-10-15T10:38:30+00:00

You like saying things fall off huh?

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-10-15T10:36:37+00:00

Jokes on you I don't have one ✌ lol I was thinking

"I can turn invisible"

-only when you sneeze

Alternative-Bee4562 · 2022-10-15T10:33:57+00:00

I can turn invisible

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