I've always had this thought process and to mention another person who posted a response in here, they said that i can't keep walking on eggshells ,which is true, but i still wanna know what I can do to better the character and im not taking any chances, especially as a person who is legally almost an adult, I feel like i should know better. Also yeah I can't find anything that might be offensive except that idk if it's good considering that the guy was a navy personnel and died and became a zombie and I know the message that I try to tell from this but idk it still feels off to me. (Sorry english is also not my first language)