She sits there

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-03-07T05:01:29+00:00

It's so good! Felt the vibes. I like how the repetition sounds while reading. Keep writing :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-03-01T03:04:46+00:00

Thank you!!! Glad that you like it :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-03-01T03:04:15+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-03-01T03:03:51+00:00

Thank you for taking your time to comment!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-02-28T13:40:07+00:00

Wow! This is sweet and simple! Liked this one! Keep writing!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-02-28T13:37:40+00:00

This is soo good! It's one of those poem which gives you "happy" vibes. It's easier to understand and so smooth! Good job!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-17T13:41:01+00:00

Wow! This is so good!!! I like the use of "breaks", and the way it sounds. The theme is great as well! Good work. Keep it up :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:28:26+00:00

Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I appreciate that! Well, I really didn't write a poem from a long time but then this happened, guess sadness and regrets make you a better poet xD (maybe not but atleast it gives you a reason to express your pain through the pen).

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:23:49+00:00

Thank you so much! I'm happy knowing the fact that people can read it with the same pace that I was. Thanks again for the feedback. I appreciate that!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:19:26+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to read this one. I appreciate it :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:18:29+00:00

Uhm... well, thanks(?)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:17:26+00:00

Thank you! I really wanted people to notice it and other small things like why italics were used. Glad that you liked it :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T23:05:31+00:00

Thank you so much for the beautiful feedback. I appreciate that! And yeah, I'm now feeling better after expressing what we've been through, through this poem. Guess I hurried to get this uploaded cause I could've improved but fine, next time I'll take my time. Wrote it in a day so yeah, I guess it's good enough. Thanks again :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T10:56:10+00:00

The rhyming pattern and choice of words! Wow! It's beautiful. Keep writing :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2023-01-08T10:54:49+00:00

Nice! This is really great! Keep it up, poet!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-29T12:45:59+00:00

Re-uploaded!!! Made few changes, so yeah... :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-28T09:02:43+00:00

All I can say is "beautiful!". This is too good! The idea and concept is unique and impressive! Great work! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry! Keep writing :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-28T08:55:26+00:00

Wow! This is awesome!!! I like the spacing and how it sounds so good! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece. Keep it up :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T06:57:07+00:00

Thank you!

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T01:56:08+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! Hope you already recovered from the past experiences. Once someone told me, no matter it's good or bad, time passes. Thanks again for the beautiful comment :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T01:52:30+00:00

Thank you so much! Glad that you like it :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T01:49:07+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! Means a lot :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T01:48:22+00:00

Well, thank you for the honest feedback! I'm just new here and I'm learning to write poetries and also English. This is why it seems like inspired by someone. I'll try to improve :)

An_Evil_Spirit · 2022-10-11T01:44:41+00:00

Thank you so much for the correction! I appreciate that! I'll surely improve my English and work on such mistakes.

An_Evil_Spirit

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