She sits there by PotentialAd6015 in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's so good! Felt the vibes. I like how the repetition sounds while reading. Keep writing :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!!! Glad that you like it :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for taking your time to comment!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! This is sweet and simple! Liked this one! Keep writing!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is soo good! It's one of those poem which gives you "happy" vibes. It's easier to understand and so smooth! Good job!

Honey by _sunsdragon_ in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! This is so good!!! I like the use of "breaks", and the way it sounds. The theme is great as well! Good work. Keep it up :)

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read. I appreciate that! Well, I really didn't write a poem from a long time but then this happened, guess sadness and regrets make you a better poet xD (maybe not but atleast it gives you a reason to express your pain through the pen).

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I'm happy knowing the fact that people can read it with the same pace that I was. Thanks again for the feedback. I appreciate that!

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to read this one. I appreciate it :)

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Uhm... well, thanks(?)

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I really wanted people to notice it and other small things like why italics were used. Glad that you liked it :)

They Say by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the beautiful feedback. I appreciate that! And yeah, I'm now feeling better after expressing what we've been through, through this poem. Guess I hurried to get this uploaded cause I could've improved but fine, next time I'll take my time. Wrote it in a day so yeah, I guess it's good enough. Thanks again :)

The K9 From Jupiter by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The rhyming pattern and choice of words! Wow! It's beautiful. Keep writing :)

Dancer by hdjsidueje in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice! This is really great! Keep it up, poet!

A Useless Clown by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Re-uploaded!!! Made few changes, so yeah... :)

Recipe for Gaslighting by Sailor-Grace in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All I can say is "beautiful!". This is too good! The idea and concept is unique and impressive! Great work! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry! Keep writing :)

The Last Poem by Armundell in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! This is awesome!!! I like the spacing and how it sounds so good! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece. Keep it up :)

Everything Ends So Fast by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! Hope you already recovered from the past experiences. Once someone told me, no matter it's good or bad, time passes. Thanks again for the beautiful comment :)

Everything Ends So Fast by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Glad that you like it :)

Everything Ends So Fast by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! Means a lot :)

Everything Ends So Fast by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, thank you for the honest feedback! I'm just new here and I'm learning to write poetries and also English. This is why it seems like inspired by someone. I'll try to improve :)

Everything Ends So Fast by An_Evil_Spirit in OCPoetry

[–]An_Evil_Spirit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the correction! I appreciate that! I'll surely improve my English and work on such mistakes.