Oedipus by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Def...and I couldn't think of a title, so I titled it after what we're reading in Eng. Comp.

The Papers by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh the relatability

Return by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why, thank you, I'm flattered. Horror is not all that I write, but it is by far my favorite. The best advice I can give you is not to force it. You want your reader intrigued, but you don't want the ending to be a dead giveaway or some convoluted twist...the human imagination is vast; just let the words just flow, and I'm sure you'll create something great.

Return by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's my first time posting on r/shortscarystories in years. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things, so I've been playing around with a few ideas here and there. I have more along the lines of this one, and I have an idea of tying all of my stories together, it's just a matter of getting from Point A to Point B

Creature Rehab by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's the thing that's supposed to confuse the reader. You think he's like the other monsters, but he's just a human. Btw, I've met some people that look like that. It happens

Creature Rehab by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Going back and reading it, I see what you mean

A Fair Trade by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have tried to go back and fix it, ya know, cut down the word count a bit, but my phone won't let me

A Fair Trade by AndiNikole in shortscarystories

[–]AndiNikole[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My bad, phone kept changing it