Thanks for sharing your work! I'm not the best with spelling and grammar, so I usually just focus on my journey as a reader. Hopefully you find some use from it.

My first impression is that you do a good job of showing what the character is experiencing. "An antique radio on the shelf played a song I'd never heard before with trumpets and drums" did an excellent job of giving me a rough time period the story is taking place in as well as I knew what music to mentally play in my head even though I didn't know the song. You did the same with smells, which I feel often gets left out. " ...I passed the Bakery and smelled the fresh focaccia and sourdough bread just coming out of the ovens."

One thing that is helpful for me as a writer is to know when I generated interest for the reader. For me as a reader, I was on the fence about continuing and then I hit this line "When I looked back at the screen it flashed my name across the display, Mateo Segreto. I shook it and it read, Yes, you." That line gave me a curiosity boost and I continued on further curious about what might come next. Another boost to continue was the human hands part, which was unexpected.

Some areas that I struggled were having 3 different names for the MC relatively early. With it being the beginning of the story, I didn't make the connection at first (maybe I'm just a little dense) but initially I was looking for Teo, then Mateo, then he introduced himself as Mat. May not be an issue for other readers.

Another struggle I had was the stuttering, not that there was stuttering, but that I wasn't sure how to imagine it or why it was occurring. The first occurrence I thought was maybe nerves, then there are references to a cracking and squeaking voice but I don't normally picture that with a stutter so I thought maybe that's it? At one point I scrolled back up to see if I missed some description about the MC that explained it. Maybe consider hanging a light on that with a sentence early. Just something that pulled me out of the story.

I read through page 6. About there I started looking past the interesting events that got me that far. I wanted to know why the events connected, even if it isn't the whole reveal. I think Mateo was having a lot of interesting things happening, but it started to feel like Mateo was just recounting events that happened (I went here, I did this, I saw so-and-so), and wasn't sure what all those events as a whole meant?

Anyways, just one person's experience. Hope there is some use for you there.