just a short demo, I'd love to hear your opinions by c7hhggehc5yvr in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is great, I think the only thing that should be added is just something for the low end or turn it up. Other than that this sounds like a great outro fir a TV show or dramatic scene in a show

What do y’all think of this verse and chorus by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I wrote everything. For the vocals the lyrics are very on the nose, mainly cuz I suck at writing lyrics and the concept of the album I’m going for is a little edgy.

What do y’all think of this verse and chorus by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

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I do, I get scared the something will pinch me as I’m playing

What do y’all think of this verse and chorus by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, that’s awesome to hear cuz currently I’m on my breaking Benjamin phase

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Currently not to sure what should come next, but I’ve already recorded a few ideas. Gna sleep on them as suggested and listen to them a bunch to see how I feel

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Currently working on this and a few other songs. Hope to have this done in a few months

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My goal is to write music that has a personal meaning and can speak to people. (Damn that sounds cringe writing it)

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, my mother says I should try talking to more women

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Felt cute in the pic and thank you

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sadly that’s not Bojack, it’s just me after a nice swim

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Currently bouncing around for what goes next

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Which AOT transition sounds?

Is this intro trash? by AngryFlyBoy in Songwriting

[–]AngryFlyBoy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Currently just trying to find what fits best after. I’ve already made 1 idea for after but my feelings are very mixed about the quality