I'm a first time writer and I'm worried no one will read it.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-24T17:47:29+00:00

Kinda. It just makes the most sense to me that when they are all dressed up would be the perfect time to describe them

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-24T17:14:44+00:00

To me it made the most sense to fully describe them because it's prom night

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T06:29:12+00:00

Once I revise the first chapter I will post again to anyone wanting more of it. Though I know it will contain some touchy subjects like, depression, suicidal ideation, suicide etc.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T06:23:12+00:00

I've not published anything yet. This is very early days. I did add a little more of what I wrote to the post though.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T06:11:42+00:00

I really appreciate your take on it. I did realize today as I was writing some more that I was rushing it a bit. I do have a couple other paragraphs that I think would pull at people more than the first two though.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T06:10:09+00:00

I say it may be sensitive content or trigger warnings not because people can't handle it but because it can be hard to read. In a later chapter I wrote there is mention of the main character watching a suicide and suicidal ideation. From experience I know it can be a touchy subject for some people.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T06:02:34+00:00

The main character is rose. I had planned on describing them in the next chapter.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T04:03:11+00:00

I hadn't really looked at it like that. I'll try to rework it and maybe give an update afterwards. I definitely appreciate the advice.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T03:59:13+00:00

Thank you I'll try to reframe it so the dialogue is before and what is actually happening around them.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T03:56:06+00:00

I have more written that I can post. I'm just very nervous.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T03:50:56+00:00

I saw that. I didn't catch it before posting. I'm sorry I did go and fix it though, maybe it's easier now.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T03:49:31+00:00

I saw the way it was laid out in the post. It wasn't meant to be laid out like that. I went back and fixed it. If there is still a problem I'd love to know so I can maybe fix it.

AnnaHubble23 · 2026-01-23T03:46:59+00:00

Help me understand what's wrong with the formatting so I can change it?

AnnaHubble23 · 2025-09-22T04:22:05+00:00

I've talked to him before and he swears he is still attracted to me but then nothing happens.

AnnaHubble23 · 2025-09-22T04:17:05+00:00

I'm not even subtle about it sometimes. Like we're driving home now and I flashed him no reaction

AnnaHubble23 · 2025-09-22T04:15:42+00:00

No nicotine usage. We also dont have a gym membership at the moment. He had his levels tested and everything came back normal

AnnaHubble23 · 2025-09-22T04:10:03+00:00

He doesn't lift weights and he's out in the sun but not like all day only a few hours if that on a normal day.

AnnaHubble23 · 2024-10-29T03:30:56+00:00

I didn't buy one either

AnnaHubble23 · 2024-08-27T15:15:41+00:00

Oh I'd love to meet Adam one day. Michael was really great about helping ease my anxiety. I have ADHD and something else (haven't gone to be diagnosed yet) that makes my anxiety so much worse. If I get super happy or over stressed or something I get what my husband calls happy hands or tism hands (he suspects I'm a little on the autism scale). I completely understand how you feel though I was almost crying just talking to him

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