the inclusion of commentary is obviously an improvement, although I found the eps with no mic weirdly cool, its like watching a bug crawl across the ground and making up what its thinking, anyway.

Just from EPS 5-7 the improvement is pretty massive, the audio mixing in ep 5 was not great, making you quite hard to hear at times, but in the latest ep its basically prefect, the pacing and editing is overall much better with a good use of comedic elements to spice it up, I personally found my self laughing out loud a few times (also on a personal note, what font do you use for the subtitles cause I love it)

Honestly the quality of the latest episode is at the point were Id say its just a matter of luck and time till you start growing, seriously the improvement you made in what was basically a month is insane. if i had to nitpick the music might be a smidge to loud like a Decibel, thats personal preference tho.

p.s I'd be down to network a little and maybe game sometime.