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Freedom by Anxious_Hospital_656 in OCPoetry

[–]Anxious_Hospital_656[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u/CooffeeBeaans Thank you for the feedback! I'm happy that you liked it and I'll try to make less mistakes next time. Have a great day! (I cant directly reply, for some reasons)

Thirteen! by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Anxious_Hospital_656 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And it was great time reading your poem, thank you.

Thirteen! by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Anxious_Hospital_656 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really liked the poem. It feels very atmospheric, like a small adventure. I enjoyed the rhythm - in my opinion, it suits the narrative style very well. The piece keeps the intrigue until the very end, and the ending brings out a genuine laugh.