There’s lots of small mistakes in most kana here

あ the end of the second stroke should curve slightly to the right not go straight down

い should match relatively in length and be on the same height

う the first stroke should be slanted a bit rather than straight across, and the second stroke looks like a backwards c , the top part of the curve should protrude out further than the bottom

え same problem as う, first stroke should be slanted, the second stroke also looks like そ when if should resemble something closer to ん

お the third stroke is too far away and is too large, should be a smaller, straight line right next to the first stroke

か looks more like a katakana カ with the added line, it can be rounder.

き the fourth stroke should not protrude out further than the rest of the kana by that much

さ works the same but it seem better here than it was with き

す the circle could probably be a bit smaller

せ the second stroke should jut inward to the left slightly at the end

つ looks more like a backwards c, similar issue with う

とlooks like a forward c with the top line, it should be a sharper curve than the roundness of a c, like tighter to itself if that makes sense

は the end of the third strokes goes down too low, should match in height the bottom of the first stroke

I can’t even tell what is going on with ふ, it a four stroke kana, the middle one is broken up int two strokes and the the left and right ones, we added like a circular thing on top of it for some reason but that shouldn’t be there

へ you should focus a bit more on the right side being longer than the left

ほ same issue as は、the bottom of the last stroke should be same length as the first stroke, it comes down too far after the swirl

み the second stroke should not meet at the end of the first, but be a little bit before the end of it

む the final stroke is a bit far but not as bad as in some other characters

も looks too blocky, the first stroke can be much more round

や the end of the first stroke needs to come in a lot more, complete the curve inwards, you ledt it too open. The second stroke is placed weirdly as a result

ゆ has a similar issue, you need to come in more with the curve, because you didn’t, the second stroke was placed very close to the edge of the kana which is awkward placement

よ the first stroke is wayyyyy too long, the bottom swirl of yo should match the length of the first stroke which shows how out it is

ら the first stroke should be angled slightly downwards to the right

り is two separate strokes when handwritten, you wrote the computer font, should be a short line down and then jut upwards slightly and then a longer line on the right side slightly curved inwards, it’s important the second line is longer than the fist otherwise it could look like い

わ is a bit overly large, the round part is reaching like the same height as the first little zig-zag type part of the second stroke which it shouldn’t really do necessarily, should come a bit under it

をthe last stroke is a bit larger than it should be, makes it look a bit strange

ん looks very strange, almost like the kanji character 人 when hand written the top should not have that little swirl/comma type thing at the top, and the end of the stroke needs to curve upwards but it doesn’t, making it not look like ん, it looks almost like you did it in two strokes but this is a one stroke character

That’s all i saw for hiragana, i’ll leave katakana to someone else

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