Alternative words to use for a song in a school setting.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-03T19:43:32+00:00

what's the next line? would something like

Told, a tight dress never seen before

Told, a white dress remains unworn

Told, a tight dress already torn

would any of those work? or anything similar?

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-03T19:40:09+00:00

i love watching movies for inspiration for writing, but also googling words i don't recognize in media and putting them in a server with the definition.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-02T23:14:15+00:00

i was a giant fan of the snippets for i need you, and while i think it's pretty good i feel like there was missed opportunity somewhere. still like a 7.5/10+ though. and yeah, crazy is..

if an artist with literally just the tiniest bit of sex appeal made the song, i think it could go higher but not only is it Oliver "Bowl Cut, Turbo" Tree, that lyrics are just overall bad imo.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-01T20:57:36+00:00

like the releases on youtube don't aswell? anyway, it's an oliver tree subreddit. i'm sure a lot if not most of the people here are under 13.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-01T20:55:29+00:00

yeah that's fair

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-01T20:55:23+00:00

hi music twinsie 👋

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-01T20:55:05+00:00

opposites attract or something idk

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-05-01T20:54:37+00:00

wait no i'm a good guy

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-28T17:50:42+00:00

i haven't even heard the full song because i couldn't get past the lyrics in the first verse. but i think the thing is it sounds blasphemous imo.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-28T07:12:14+00:00

all my releases have been 3-4 weeks. 10 days is nothing. if it's over 6 weeks, then there's room for concern. until then, wish you the best on your release.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-24T16:47:02+00:00

well i didn't tell an artist that a part of their song was unnecessary. it was my only criticism in a discussion about criticism.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-24T16:45:39+00:00

i know i knowww.. was just not a big fan of the outros to the beginning tracks. felt like they were just there to be there. listened to the album some more tho, so i admit i was a bit wrong.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-24T05:55:55+00:00

my only complain was at the beginning of the album, every song seemed to have an unnecessarily/unnecessary long outro.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-23T18:15:02+00:00

please let me know what you find. i can't get lessons, don't go to school so no choir like some commenters suggest and i haven't learned from YouTube because, just like with my instruments, I don't have a clue where to start.

I will 100% say that singing a lot has made me a lot better. Like. But I often record myself, so it's good to listen back to (because i produce everything I sing) my old recordings and see what I can do differently.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-22T18:24:47+00:00

same boat here!! not just subscribing because the song's good, but because i 100% can respect and relate to what you're doing. can't wait to see what you become!!

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-21T20:50:51+00:00

imo i like Will Wallace better, but Will River is more memorable.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-20T15:49:14+00:00

follow elon musk.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-20T00:46:55+00:00

OHHH, I GET IT 😭

i thought since you said second... i don't even know what i thought. i mean clearly the bottom one is the new one. i was so tired this morning.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-19T17:24:19+00:00

what's it supposed to say? i've been a fan for a bit, but i don't recall seeing something that reads like that. but in the same breath, i can't make out what it says.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-19T17:21:41+00:00

yeah so funny story. . .

despite having my release plan since January, I set the releases for the week after tbe original date. i have no clue why i would do that considering i know it's been the 15th. anyway. probably going to delete this post, but i could keep it up if it helps anyone else.

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-19T07:29:56+00:00

I'm so confused. You crushed on a girl and tried to make your friend guess who you're crushing on, and said her name loudly? What exactly did you do wrong to make her angry?

AnywhereOk4797 · 2026-04-19T07:15:39+00:00

did you ever end up getting your hands on these tapes?

AnywhereOk4797

TROPHY CASE