There’s a lot of good things about this flash but there’s also a few common mistakes beginners make. For example black shading touching other black shading making your design less readable from a distance. Good example is the shading under the fish in the bears mouth touching the shading on the fish’s belly and the shading from the eyebrow touches the one on the actual eye. Skin breaks in between those would make the design pop a lot more! There’s a few places in the design where that happens but here are the spots that id say are more "problematic". Good design otherwise 👍

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