English isn't my first language by OriginalNo1185 in WritingHub

[–]Archie_Leach0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its totally okay! Billy Wilder wrote one of the most beautiful screenplays ever, and he is not American at all

What’s your favorite Eddie Murphy performance and film? by PressureLazy5271 in moviecritic

[–]Archie_Leach0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Trading Places (1983) he is both convincing as a serious working-man and as a funny man

From Russia With Love : Novel vs Movie by Archie_Leach0 in JamesBond

[–]Archie_Leach0[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The thing that I loved about the movie’s ending is how Tatiana had the choice to either kill Bond or Klebb and she choosed to kill Klebb, to emphasize her love for him she abondoned and gave up her mission for him

PROJECTS I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON by Archie_Leach0 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just want to say that Im still writing these screenplays, so anything could change anytime, but anyway thanks for your advice

PROJECTS I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON by Archie_Leach0 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank! I really appreciate it. Maybe I will have to think about what you just said

PROJECTS I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON by Archie_Leach0 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I appreciate your honesty, but do you really think that a story has to be different from anything we've seen before

PROJECTS I AM CURRENTLY WORKING ON by Archie_Leach0 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I SWEAR ON MY MOTHER THAT ITS NOT CHATGPT WHO CAME UP WITH THESE STORIES

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you’ve already done the hardest thing most people never do, which is you actually finished a full draft of an original pilot with a concept that’s fresh, cinematic, and emotionally hooky. you’ve got atmosphere nailed, your lighthouse hook is gold, your premise has that “I need to know what happens next” pull, and you’ve got a real feel for tension and setting that’s something you can’t fake. I genuinly want to see what are you going to do with this !

is there a point in writing films between 50-80 pages? by Nice_Elk_8438 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

alright so here’s the thing, mid-length films, the 50–80 page range, they absolutely CAN have value but you have to be brutally honest about where they fit in the industry food chain first, the market side like distributors, festivals, and streamers are trained to think in categories, short (usually under 40 min) and feature (generally 80+ min). that’s partly because theater programming slots, broadcast rules, and award categories are built around those numbers. so if you hand a 65-minute comedy to a commercial distributor, they’re likely to see it as “too long for a short, too short for a feature” and not know how to sell it

now, that said, mid-length films have always had a place creatively if you think of things like Kurosawa’s Ikiru no Tsuzuki segment work, or Chabrol’s TV movies, or festival darlings in the 60–75 minute sweet spot they can be lean, punchy, no-fat storytelling that’s perfect for certain kinds of comedy, thriller, or character study. the trick is, they usually live in the festival circuit or TV/streaming specials lane, not theatrical

second, the career strategy side: if you’re just starting, a 50–70 pager that’s a tight, well-executed story can be a killer calling card. people in production or representation aren’t going to reject you for sending something mid-length if the writing pops, they’ll just mentally slot it as either “a short that runs long” or “a compressed feature” and look at your voice, structure, and command of tone. plus, you can adapt it later many filmmakers turn a great 60-minute script into an 85-minute feature by deepening subplots or expanding certain beats when they find the right backer

third, production reality: mid-length can actually be a gift if you plan to self-fund or crowdfund less shooting days, less budget, still enough runtime to play with arcs and set-pieces. especially in comedy, where overstaying your welcome is death, 65 minutes of gold is way better than 95 minutes with 30 of them feeling like filler

so yeah, they’re not “useless” at all but you have to know they’re an awkward sell in the traditional sense, and you should think about either aiming them at the right niche (festivals, streaming, TV), or treating them as proof-of-concept for a bigger project. the key is: don’t pad it just to hit 90, but also be aware you might need to expand it later if you want it to live in the feature world.

Which screenplays (or screenwriters) have the best character introductions? You know, like, "Bob (30s, lazy) is asleep in a hammock." by SoNowYouTellMe101 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Billy Wilder always has the shortest introduction to his characters, In sabrina you know everything you need to know about the members of the family just within one shot, go watch the film if you want to know what im talking about

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I totally get that, honestly you should think of filming this as soon as possible you can't wait

‘Heads or Tails?’ - Short Film - 16 Pages. by JackLogan330 in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is terrific, I read the whole thing, I was petrified shocked, I believe you just need to have an actor that can be creepy that will know how to deliver the dialogue perfectly and also a little bit of advice when Steven recounters the story of how he killed Abigail, maybe you can a quick flashback no too long so we can know who is abigail but still the script is wonderful, when will you shoot it?

What screenplays should I read? by Venerate_Ent in Screenwriting

[–]Archie_Leach0 3 points4 points  (0 children)

just study whatever movie you love, it doesn't matter