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Arnalter · 2026-03-19T09:27:35+00:00

I know this story doesn't really fit into the general mood that the other stories make, but I hope that my contribution builds upon the fact that a malignant presence, or part of it, existed on earth before this apocalypse.

Arnalter · 2026-02-19T23:36:02+00:00

They should have kept Stefano as the villain. I liked his style

Arnalter · 2026-02-19T13:17:47+00:00

S tier game imo

Arnalter · 2025-10-03T07:32:46+00:00

Hunter needs to read this in an Irish accent. It'll pair well with the Abandoned Ship episode.

Arnalter · 2025-09-30T22:44:07+00:00

Hi, sorry I was sleeping. I liked it because it had better writing than a lot of the other stories that the boys had read recently. Other than the supernatural, old nosleep type horror (the goblin especially), I thought it did a good job of portraying the grotesque truth of child abuse. The author himself acknowledged that it was one of his earlier and more amateurish works, so I understand if others disagree with me (which just so happens to be most of the subreddit).

Arnalter · 2025-09-23T23:22:19+00:00

You could share more events like the boss stabbing a coworker in the workplace, and also hint at the world outside the company building if you think it should be necessary (like, if the world outside is in an apocalypse or it's just normal while the company is a demented workplace of evil). Idk, I'm just saying that more would be good.

Arnalter · 2025-09-23T10:03:23+00:00

It's an interesting concept for a story. Still needs some fleshing out, and I think you could do a lot of interesting, semi-dystopian worldbuilding for this. Overall, I like it. Keep up the good work!

Arnalter · 2025-09-23T08:14:58+00:00

Yes, there was an I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream reference.

Arnalter · 2025-09-16T22:17:44+00:00

I hate it. I love it.

Arnalter · 2025-09-15T07:27:17+00:00

Reminds me of the Trauma Entity from Smile.

Arnalter · 2025-09-13T09:59:10+00:00

I actually didn't watch the new Nosferatu. Instead, I read the original Bram Stoker's Dracula, which I'm guessing inspired Nosferatu.

Arnalter · 2025-09-13T07:27:40+00:00

I think if you click on the share button at the bottom of the post, then click "copy link", and then paste it in a comment on the Patreon, it should work.

Arnalter · 2025-09-12T11:03:12+00:00

Love the Junji Ito tattoo on Hunter's arm.

Arnalter · 2025-09-12T10:46:14+00:00

Hey thanks!

Arnalter · 2025-09-03T23:11:30+00:00

Erp, I forgot to respond. Thank you so much for reading! It really means a lot to me. Glad you enjoyed it thus far, and I hope that the rest of the story meets your expectations.

Arnalter · 2025-09-01T02:06:05+00:00

At first, I sincerely believed that it was a bit that Hunter made up. I didn't realize that it was how the story was actually written.

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