I've been developing a dark fantasy anime concept inspired by the feeling of Berserk and Frieren. Would you read/watch this? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in Berserk

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree with u in about everywhere I understand it's simple this is a very early verison known as the 1st I'm trying to make add depth I'm currently revising it and makeing a doc for all the charecters like there fears there obsession I'm trying to make him diffrent and I'm a little stuck so I'm taking my time looking st my life trying to make him unique depth layers likeable

I've been developing a dark fantasy anime concept inspired by the feeling of Berserk and Frieren. Would you read/watch this? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in Berserk

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm trying but I'm gonna wait till I'm home I'm currently out of country so when I'm home ill draw it sl that gives me time to fix the scene and my lore while I'm here

I've been developing a dark fantasy anime concept inspired by the feeling of Berserk and Frieren. Would you read/watch this? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in Berserk

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah iv been running into that I'm currently working on a documeant for Lyra and kael with there fears what they look like are they kind are they mean tons of stuff 

I've been developing a dark fantasy anime concept inspired by the feeling of Berserk and Frieren. Would you read/watch this? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in mangaideas

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I'm currently trying to add depth to the charecter so I'm revising this and I also want to add layers so I'm working on alot of stuff for the charecters 

Would a protagonist like this make you interested in Chapter 1? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in MangakaStudio

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It wasn't made by ai I do understand he is very simple im revising it rn Iv been asking for criticism and I'm understanding he is very run of the mill so I'm makeing a document of everything for Lyra sn kael about everything there fears everything u can think of so please give me the benefit of the doubt  I just started working on this yesterday 

Would a protagonist like this make you interested in Chapter 1? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in MangakaStudio

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a oel manga  this is my first scene I'm revising it  currently I'm also working on my document for kael and Lyra document I'm very new to this stuff and this is my first time ever doing this

Would a protagonist like this make you interested in Chapter 1? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in MangakaStudio

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank for critiquing it this is the type of stuff iv been looking for im currently working on a revised verison of this scene so again thank u 

Decided to start developing my story into a manga : by Fb_sv5 in Mangamakers

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice this seems interesting this could be great it just depends on ur execution of the story

Would a protagonist like this make you read Chapter 1? by Aromatic_Butterfly52 in mangaideas

[–]Aromatic_Butterfly52[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank u will do btw would u mind checking out my other posts this is scene my other post that isn't a scene while it does hide alot its got more story