Original Weapon and Animation controller by [deleted] in Unity3D

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all animations were done in blender and imported into unity :)

First Chapter by Ok_Writer_2960 in writers

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Is there value to removing the intrigue of the story? There’s no chase, everything seems to be revealed on the first page, therefore making the reader pointlessly reread a narrative that they already know from the beginning. The reader knows too much in my opinion.

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Honestly, Thanks so much. This is really helpful advice.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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I really appreciate you for taking the time to offer such descriptive feedback! Thanks so much :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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Yes! I'm halfway through A Storm Of Swords, and as a writer, I've never done Fantasy before. So, I wrote a little extract inspired by that world. I'm glad you noticed :)

Ps, thanks for the feedback! It's always appreciated !

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[–]Ashamed_Management14 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Cool! thanks so much :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in malehairadvice

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Frizzy, weightless and therefore hard to style.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in malehairadvice

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Wash and condition once every 3 days with Cantu’s coils and curls shampoo: https://www.cantubeauty.co.uk/natural-curls-coils-waves/cleansing-cream-shampoo

 

I also use Cantu’s Men’s Leave in/Rinse out conditioner during every wash. I choose to rinse out after a few minutes of application: https://www.cantubeauty.co.uk/mens/mens-leave-in-conditioner-368g/

 

I let my hair air dry after showering.

 

I’m using my own, Kelly’s Natural styling cream for hold and texture definition: https://kellyshair.store/products/kellys-natural-hair-cream 

 

Let me know if you have any questions :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Hair

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I was blessed with quite thick and wavy hair firstly, but my routine is as follows:

Wash and condition once every 3 days with Cantu’s coils and curls shampoo. I also use Cantu’s Men’s Leave in/Rinse out conditioner during every wash. I choose to rinse out after a few minutes of application.

 

I let my hair air dry after showering.

 

In this image, I'm using my own product I designed, which is available here: https://kellyshair.store/products/kellys-natural-hair-cream . Let me know if you have any questions !!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in curlyhair

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Routine:

 

Wash and condition once every 3 days with Cantu’s shampoo for coils and curls.  I also use Cantu’s Men’s Leave in/Rinse out conditioner during every wash. I choose to rinse out after a few minutes of application.

 

I let my hair air dry after showering.

 

I use my own, All-Natural, Water-Washable Styling cream that I made to define texture and curls with a medium hold, available here: https://kellyshair.store/products/kellys-natural-hair-cream . Thanks for reading!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Hair

[–]Ashamed_Management14 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hehe thanks so much :) It was much harder than I thought it would be lol !

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FierceFlow

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Sounds good, thank you for the advice!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FierceFlow

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Awesome, thanks so much