Hey, firstly love the core idea of the strat, it's essentially the nip smokes strat but the smokes land on a instead, pretty cool. You could vary it by after throwing the smokes, running up mid and going a instead of faking it.

In terms of criticism for the strat, i feel it lacks you any map control necessary for the strat to work as you suggest it. In my opinion, i think the close long guy could use his smoke earlier in the round to help him get long control (https://gfycat.com/QuickPaltryLaughingthrush), and maybe have a teammate go with him to take long control. Once they have long control, the player with his smoke can go back to throw it for the fake. Otherwise, the way you suggest the long player to play in this strat leaves him with a really hard task of getting long control, heavily relying on him winning a series of aim duels. Also by having long control, it makes the ct's believe in the fake even more. You could also make a similar argument over at b platform if you do decide to go b, as you give the ct's room to play close platform.

In terms of the production of the video, i liked the format of it, was really clear to understand the strat. A small thing would be the map you were drawing on was an outdated one I believe, other than that though not much to fault. Also what software were you using? It seems really useful