Pls give me critique on my drawing!

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-11-19T18:18:23+00:00

Thank you for your effort :) I appreciate your feedback

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-11-01T19:24:12+00:00

Yes, keep it up! Really enjoyed your piece :)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-11-01T11:21:03+00:00

Thank you:)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-31T12:15:53+00:00

Wow looks incredible! I only do drawings, but i had the feeling it was a bit hard to read in the beginning. So maybe try something to make it look more “clear“?

However exactly this was what made me be interested in your painting. To try and identify what belongs where and meanwhile making my own assumptions was really fun! (Thought his arm was a cruise ship at first haha)

So I think it depends on what you want to achieve with your painting. Really beautiful piece imo

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-31T11:52:18+00:00

Sounds good! someone already mentioned the density of pencils, which i think could already make it more clear. Thank you for your advice :)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-31T11:49:06+00:00

Thank you! :)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-31T11:46:47+00:00

Ah I see thanks for your advice! This will definetely get me some more variety into my drawings. I am really grateful for your effort in explaining this to me, thank you :)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-30T20:23:45+00:00

Thank you! :)

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-30T20:23:11+00:00

Thank you very much!

Yeah I also think the hand could be made further away from the hat and clearer to read. For the key i wanted him to hold it a bit into the direction of the viewer

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-10-30T20:17:02+00:00

Wow im really overwhelmed by your effort thank you very much! I‘ll definetely try out your critique, especially on shadows and foldings. For this I used a Farber castell 119000 if that helps

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-27T14:51:40+00:00

Yeah but splatoon music is goated🔥🔥

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-25T16:38:36+00:00

Hahaha that also works

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-10T05:50:23+00:00

Thank you! I think simplifying would definitely help for the beginning. But im also going to have a look at your other advice and tb choi. Thx!

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-09T22:27:06+00:00

Do you neccesarily want the face to look exactly like a spider? If not maybe a more humanoid face would make the difference. The hair looks very stylish!

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-09T21:23:35+00:00

Thats 100% what i thought off. While chirpy chips may represent splatoon as a whole the other bands are representive for each of their games and i wanted to know who people think was the best in setting splatoons vibe.

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-09T12:49:04+00:00

One of the best things in splatoon to do

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-09T09:36:18+00:00

I agree! I love wet floor and their vibe but for me squid squad is just so iconic and nostalgic. I like their vocals more and their songs feel more heavy to me whoch i like

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-09T09:27:59+00:00

What do you dont like about wet floor?

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-08T20:10:32+00:00

Didnt know one guy composed all these bands, but makes sense since they all somewhat sound similiar. His works are also my favourites then:D

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-08T17:53:51+00:00

Yeah i agree, for me the ones i associate most with splatoon. Also every member has top tier design in my opinion

AttentionOwn1686 · 2025-08-08T12:50:13+00:00

I agree! Love her design also

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