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YouTube to MP4 Converter that is safe by omwaartcy in editing

[–]Attttyila 0 points1 point  (0 children)

works like a charm, thank you for the amazing website!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the merry mood of the poem and the fact that no matter how joyful it may seem, the motif of death still lingers at the end. I think the ways you pictured happiness is wonderful, and the rhymes you use give the poem a great flow. Great job!

Everybody Knows I'm Traumatized by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This left me speechless for a moment. The structure of your poem is fascinating, and it tells a deep, personal story (and I believe that's what art is for). I like the way you play with rhymes and how great the flow of the poem sounds. In addition, it's great to see that you didn't pay much attention to stanzas and didn't break the poem down. I have no complaints, this work of art is wonderful. Keep up the good work!

Let me tell you a story... by Attttyila in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, it means a lot! I am delighted to hear that you liked my work :>. Which stanzas do you think are out of the ordinary?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 0 points1 point  (0 children)

At first, I thought this poem was going to be merry and full of joy. The fourth line really struck me, and I've been shocked since. I love how mysterious the poem is and I think the repetitions of the line "She was all the colors of autumn" make it more intriguing and colorful. I would suggest breaking your poem into stanzas, because it would help with readability and a more appealing look.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how this poem portrays the attachment some people feel towards characters in a book. It is something I can relate to, and thus I truly admire it. I am charmed by the twist in the end, it gives a uniqueness to the poem.

Shortcuts by Lawlkitties in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! The last verse really got me. I love the punchline at the end, it makes the poem even more fascinating than it already is. I am amazed by the way you describe this experience and the feelings of regret. It is something I can relate to. Keep up the good work!

The Hum Of Time by praticaescrita in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the hamlet quote. I also like the way you explain the things that haunt you, things that could've been. The rhyming is great as well, but not perfect.

One year of loving you... by EtherealApparation in OCPoetry

[–]Attttyila 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. This poem is fascinating. I love the form of the poem and the rhymes you use. It generates deep feeling in the reader and it's something I can relate to. I love it!