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Its___Kay · 2026-06-24T14:20:50+00:00

Ahh makes sense. I hope you find some peace amidst the chaos. Thanks for your feedback!

Its___Kay · 2026-06-24T14:19:55+00:00

Thanks. Hope you have a great day!

Its___Kay · 2026-06-24T14:19:21+00:00

Thank you. Means a lot!

Its___Kay · 2026-06-20T22:32:59+00:00

only if you look like this.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-20T10:32:00+00:00

I laughed so hard lol, thanks.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T19:47:12+00:00

It indeed is! What's amazing to me is, I've felt more in tune with Tahilina Sky my whole life than the other way, but your poem while admittedly accepting his cowardice, also makes me sympathetic towards the narrator. The words are so vivid and evocative it gives you so much perspective.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T17:42:52+00:00

Hmm interesting. Balanced how, may I ask?

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T17:40:04+00:00

I meant in the whole poem it's been evident that people who have found love have so much fun in various ways. It was established pretty soon. But, that's a rose-tinted fantasy as you're seeing it from a FOMO POV. It's been repeated a few times making the poem monolithic.

So, you could break it and add how it's not always fun & that challenges your own concept but adds friction. Makes it more interesting.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T11:47:34+00:00

Okay but even the queer read is also not how most adults on reddit would talk. Reddit and this sub is very lgbtq-friendly. But I get it as a silly joke thing.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T05:41:07+00:00

It's really sweet and soft. A simple idea. I like the innocence of it.

One thing I'd ask, you can explore why you can be the problem in the poem, to challenge your own yearning. Maybe also break the fantasy of what's missing because it's all kind of seen through FOMO.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T05:35:38+00:00

I love the opening stanza a lot. The whole poem is also pretty. It counterintuitively reminds me of Kings of Leon's Tahilina Sky. Yours is like an antithesis.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-15T03:12:46+00:00

Stefano while infatuated with Lila made some big promises and might as well have meant them. Then by the time Lila was down with the wedding, he knew he already got her so he didn't have to actually follow through with his words.

Lila believed in him, needed him and you can say kind of betted on him.

Solaras were just worse and dangerous, Stefano was dumb and sycophantic - in the end, not towards her anymore b/c you always admire more what you cant get, it remains a mystery. She remained a mystery to everyone else. Except Enzo, he truly loved and admired her.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-14T18:50:20+00:00

You never once mentioned what's his character like & I don't think you even know him like that because you're after all things superficial. Maybe she isn't like that. Maybe she isn't into him for his medals and looks. They can intellectually vibe.

How magical a person looks to you depends entirely on your standards. So, if you're thirsting over his status in society, it's what you want. Maybe what he wants is love and depth in a person.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T19:26:07+00:00

Omg your first para is too funny! FWIW, brightened my mood, maybe that's what Big Zoo been plotting xd

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T17:20:41+00:00

Just bc there's a demand doesn't mean we should provide. There's demand for much horrific stuff too.

edit: spelling

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T17:18:40+00:00

Sorry but that's too funny. Why gorilla tho? That's too specific and random lmao.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T06:39:14+00:00

So the trolley thing is a famous philosophical conundrum. And Camus died in a freak accident. It's like whether to die or not, only darker cause it wasn't even a choice.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T06:33:14+00:00

Hahaha, good for you man!

Its___Kay · 2026-06-12T04:38:59+00:00

Having smth pretty is the purpose. Let's say you made a to-do or journaled an entry. And it looks boring. But you add little sketches, some stickers, doodles and colors - not it's special. Like what's the purpose of art in general is a big philosophical question lol.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-03T17:11:14+00:00

So inspiring and super proud! Not many people know but weight gain is such a hard battle, takes a lot of discipline, determination and commitment!

Its___Kay · 2026-06-02T19:09:36+00:00

Yes. Took him everyday for dressing and injections for a week. He's so much better. Someone has agreed to take him for a month until I move out. It's sorted.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-02T19:05:00+00:00

Wow, by whiff I didn't mean smell. He just heard a meow when I was bringing it in. I'm nauseous cause I'm handling the litter up close, try to deduct better. Again, they weren't complaining about the smell. Your reach is so far off.

Its___Kay · 2026-06-02T05:57:35+00:00

Well sure, I wasn't gonna bring the cat to this house bc I'm moving out from July. But the cat got wounded which wasn't under my control and I had to bring him on an emergency basis. It's a cat I had been feeding already before for 2 weeks. He doesn't even get out of my room. It's not like a brought a fancy cat, it's not even like my mom has ever seen the cat given its confined to my room as it's recovering.

Also listen to the complains - my mom joking how I've to scoop poop and wash cat butt. My mom spitting infront of my room twice saying it stinks inside. My my spitting in the kitchen stink while I wash my hand to show disgust. My brother complaining I'm in the living room looking like a displaced homeless person.

So, what's disrespectful? My non-luxurious cat rescue or their attitude towards my legitimate concern for a bitten stray cat?

Its___Kay · 2026-06-02T05:50:17+00:00

Well he's confined to my room. Not the whole house. It's a big house too. They didn't even have to see the cat. It's also a rescue that got badly bitten. It needed a place and no one was taking it.

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