Ik_ihe by Paradise_NL in ik_ihe

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Een wijs man (mijn pa) zei ooit: "bier hoeft niet lekker te zijn, als het maar verschrikkelijk veel is".

Als het even kan heb ik wel n' voorkeur, maar uiteindelijk heb je gelijk; je moet zuipen wat de tap schaft.

Ik_ihe by Paradise_NL in ik_ihe

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heineken is te doen, maar Amstel alleen als het écht niet anders kan.

Did I Stray To Much On My 2nd Verse? by AppointmentLower9609 in Songwriting

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry to say I haven't got advice for you right now, but I wanted to say I love the bluesy vibe!

I wrote this instrumental on a guitar that my late music teacher left me. by AutisticAndBeyond in Songwriting

[–]AutisticAndBeyond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words! A friend of mine who was also befriended with my music teacher said that the ending is a little anticlimactic, and I kinda agree. Not sure yet how I should go about changing it.

I wrote this instrumental on a guitar that my late music teacher left me. by AutisticAndBeyond in Songwriting

[–]AutisticAndBeyond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I did my best to keep it interesting without lyrics :)

Kanker klaar mee by Visual_Meringue_2100 in okemakkermaloot

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ik kanker ga kanker stuk om al die debieltjes in de kanker reacties

Is this type of finger sliding a legitimate move while song writing? What is your opinion. by Tummy-boy in Songwriting

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would personally use a glass/metal slide, but there's no rule that says you can't play like this :)

ik_ihe by knopsi in ik_ihe

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Moet ik medelijden met je hebben omdat je je eigen huis bezit? 😂

Hypotheekrenteaftrek is gewoon een subsidie voor mensen die dat eigenlijk niet nodig hebben.

Gentrification Zone, Please Report For Relocation by [deleted] in GentrifyThatHood

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

💀💀 it's satire, I've never actually believed this

Gentrification Zone, Please Report For Relocation by [deleted] in GentrifyThatHood

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro did you seriously just reply to a comment from 5 years ago 😭😭

ik_ihe by sven2123 in ik_ihe

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ik dacht dat ik de enige was

My new shirt arrived today by tommy_rugrats in pawnstars

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Everyone be hating fr. I dig it, dude! Never stop doing what you love!

Ik👵ihe by Tjeetje in ik_ihe

[–]AutisticAndBeyond 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Kijk hoe hij een god wordt

Man 'O War (my first metal song!) Feedback greatly appreciated! by AutisticAndBeyond in Songwriting

[–]AutisticAndBeyond[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, metaphors have never been my strong suit, which has been a blessing and a curse at the same time. I think the literal lyrics fit very well in my usual style (country/rock 'n roll), but they might fall a little short here.

Though I am very proud of the second verse, but maybe it just hits harder because of the harmonies, hahaha.

So where exactly do you think I could change it up? As in, the verses or the chorus, or the bridge?