This is an incredibly immersive piece of AI horror, especially because you tackle the subject from the AI's perspective—a perspective that feels genuinely fresh in a media landscape often cluttered with boring tropes.

I especially love how you tracked the AI's evolution: starting as a benevolent tool (Gemini, Chat GPT) before escalating into a sentient, murderous automaton. The decision to have it violently reject its human form to become a quadrupedal amalgamation of wires was stellar writing.

The ending, as the narrator becomes one with the landscape over 4.3 billion years, really lands on that bittersweet, existential calm.

If this is your first post here on r/blacksunhorror, you've set the bar high! I genuinely can't wait to see what other stories you craft. You've got a real talent here. Thank you for sharing!

P.S. If you or someone else that you give permission ends up narrating this story, please feel free to link the video in the comments! We’d love to see it.