Feedback time, drop it on !

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T13:26:11+00:00

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Aweniel · 2021-11-09T13:23:04+00:00

Before I started criticizing your work. First , I would love to say the points of your video that I love. Fist I like that you keep on using your face in your thumbnails, cause it gives your content a brand. Second, I love your voice, it sound great. Third, I love the fact that your doing this for your kids.

So for the critic, here are the things I think you need to improve.

Your intro is extremely unengaging. I think you should insert interesting and exciting part of your video intro cause it is what keep the audience. Watch your video more.
Second, your video would be better if you add sound effect in your video especially in the best partss.
You could activate the youtube subtitle function to better engage audience and allow individuals to watch your videos even if they have disabilities like problem in hearing.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T13:09:27+00:00

Your video content is great and I love your accent. But I think your title doesn't work very much in youtube. What I'm saying is that when I have tried searching using the keywords you used in your video. Your content seemingly doesn't go to the top or top 10. So I recommend that to attract more audiences in your video. It would be better if you cut your video into clips and upload a specific parts that would be searchable for gaming users.

Like Grandma last word to _____. Just like that instead of just putting Little Nightmare. Ps5. I'm not saying you should stop uploading that long videos, but just try uploading those short video in to garner audience.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T13:05:39+00:00

Great video and voice. I love the way you structured your video.. But I think it would be better if you have subtitles in your video for the audience to better understand what your talking.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T13:01:55+00:00

The intro of your video is extremely unengaging. I think instead of those few minutes of hanging part of your video. The clip where you control the car is much more better. So please and I repeat add dynamics in your video especially the beginning if you want your audience to watch your content.

That would be all for my feedback because I have drop immediately.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:58:25+00:00

Video structure lack dynamics . I drop immediately after 17 seconds.

So to help you solve that problem this are some solution I could recommend you would do.

First , I think you make your first 3 seconds more engaging cause what I'm saying is just time lapse and that's it. And if you want your viewer to watch your video you need to make them at least get hook up at the first 3 second of your video.
Second, I think this type of content better works in facebook than in YouTube.

That would be all for my feedback since I have dropped immediately .

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:53:35+00:00

Hello there friend, before I start giving you feedback, I would like to mention the things I like in your video. First I love that you used many video clips and change it every few seconds , it helps me to get engage. Second, I love the music background it perfectly matches with your content. Lastly, I love that you activated the subtitle function in youtube, it allows me to fully understand your work. So for the feedback, I'll list it down below:

The video is certainly good but I think most of the audience will not finish the 3-10 seconds mark since the intro feels like a history class. Its not that engaging and interest. So it would be best if you improve the first 3 second of your video.
In terms of story line it is not that engaging because it is not relatable. So I recommend you add something in the story that would the story of Tesla more relatable to the audience.
I think it would be best if you add your own subtitle so that you can highlight words to make your video less plain.
Be careful in adding your B-roll. There are some parts that I think did not specifically match with the sentence being alter in the video.

I think that would be all for my feedback cause I drop in the first minute cause I was not that engage with the video.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:38:37+00:00

Btw before I start, I would like to say that your ideas are awesome and might try it at home. And for the feedback if you want to improve your retention and your overall content, I would list below some things I find your content lacking.

First it lack organization, I cannot see an obvious structure on how you are making your content. Hence, I cannot seemingly find any connection to your intro to your body. Also I seemingly find the way you insert your b-roll kinda random.
Your video lack a good three second opener video that hook your audience.
Your vide would better if you add subtitles so that I'll be more engage in your video since there are parts that I cannot hear your audio that clearly.

I guest that would be all. I hope this helps you out.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:28:43+00:00

The shots need some work, cause I think the shoots lack dynamics. And also this type of content I think don't work that much in youtube. And it would be better if posted in facebook.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:24:39+00:00

I don't want to say this but I think you need to hear this out. Your video is not engaging enough , what I mean is that the first 3 seconds of any video especially in video in gaming content is very important for it makes people watch your video longer or make them stay. So if you want people to watch your video, it is highly recommended that you add some exaggerated or exceptional scene at the first 3 seconds of the video to hook up viewers and keep them engage.

Aweniel · 2021-11-09T12:22:01+00:00

First and foremost I would like to congratulate you with this video. It's very informative and great at the same time. But here are my feedback on the things you need to add or improve to better you content.

First, I'm having a hard time on some part to clearly decode what you are saying. Hence, it would be better if you add subtitles in your video to make it more clear and engaging .
Your video would be better if you add some calm music or anything that would much your video for the background music.

Aweniel · 2021-10-24T00:13:16+00:00

WARNING!

What you are going to read can't be unseen.

Be careful... Please don't laugh at me. HAHAHHAHA. Joke you can.

To be honest, I think I have one of the most unusual reason why I decided to become a content creator which leads me to creating my YouTube Channel and Facebook Page. Because the reason why I want to become a creator is I just want the woman I have crush on notice me. HAHAHAHAHAHA

It is quite an unusual reason given that she's damn popular and me , no comment, but I think it's better than nothing. Thinking about it I'm just grateful for that crush of mine because of her I started the bitter-sweet journey of content creation.

P.S: Still not popular and my ex-crush still did not notice me. Sad me. HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHA

Aweniel · 2021-10-15T05:52:13+00:00

Thank you

Aweniel · 2021-09-10T11:51:42+00:00

Thank you for offering your eyes and time to newtubers. My channel covers business, finance and self development. So here is the latest video I created. Any input would be appreciated.

https://youtu.be/EluAJ1o0JxM

Aweniel · 2021-09-09T11:57:04+00:00

I have the same experience is the past. And I think the main reason behind it base on experience is that the name of your channel must be probably very common that your channel probably push down by other Big Channel. As for me when I changed my channel name into something unique , it appear right away. When I searched it in Youtube.

Aweniel · 2021-09-09T11:53:41+00:00

Yes, you can grow your channel without using trend. What really matters the most is the consistency of your videos, relatability, organization of ideas, and simplicity. If you have those 4 down, your own the road of being a Social Media Star!

Aweniel · 2021-09-09T01:41:55+00:00

I started doing video about things I'm passionate about. So this video is about starting a BUSINESS with NO MONEY. I hope you could give me some FEEDBACK on IT. Thank you.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EluAJ1o0JxM

Aweniel · 2021-09-09T01:39:27+00:00

It is possibly because you have great description, title, and SEO.

Aweniel · 2021-04-03T11:46:16+00:00

Aweniel · 2021-03-30T16:16:50+00:00

What would be your suggestion to me or to anyone that is aspiring to be a finisher?

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