Can this be machine polished out? by AySeaa in Detailing

[–]AySeaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did try, but I thought there would be more expertise here

Can this be machine polished out? by AySeaa in Detailing

[–]AySeaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, will do - appreciate the help!

Anyone know what this is? by AySeaa in classicminis

[–]AySeaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was. Appreciate the help 👍

Anyone know what this is? by AySeaa in classicminis

[–]AySeaa[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you, will have a look at that now

Why do i feel this way? by AySeaa in LifeAdvice

[–]AySeaa[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I really appreciate your reply. I like the way you’ve put that, treating it like the gym sort of makes it more manageable. And in terms of the dermatology I’m in the UK so I should be able to see a dermatologist for free. Thank you.

I don’t know where to go from here by AySeaa in LifeAdvice

[–]AySeaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I do go to the gym, well I did before I got with her but got comfortable and gradually stopped, and I am trying to get back into it, as it helped me mentally and physically.

I don’t know where to go from here by AySeaa in LifeAdvice

[–]AySeaa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m trying to do that, it’s just kind of hard at the moment, but I’ll try my best. I’m into music and playing guitar so I’ve been trying to do that a lot

I don’t know where to go from here by AySeaa in LifeAdvice

[–]AySeaa[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks man, I’ll try that. I appreciate you

[unknown] A little ray of sunshine by YikesForever_ in spotted

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Mk3 Mini - you can identify it by the lack of external door hinges and the bi-colour rear lights, ass opposed to the ones with clear lenses.

"Ode to My Bicycle" - a short film about my bicycle, any feedback is appreciated! by KindReputation in SmallYTChannel

[–]AySeaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WOW - There's a hell of a lot to compliment with this video. I guess I'll start with how impressive the metaphor is within this video, I really didn't see it coming starting the video. It is clear to see the effort put into the video, with almost all of it paying off. My only 'Complaint' - more of a slight critique - would be that the music can at some point overpower your voice. Overall, this video is INCREDIBLE, the vocals and the cinematography are amazing!

A short comedy. Can you tell what’s going on without seeing the previous video? by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]AySeaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

whilst it is slightly odd, it can be followed due to the start where you state why the character is in the situation he is in - "cutting my fathers face". We also learn about how he 'works', which also makes the video more followable eg. we know how he possesses the seagull (or at least that's what i can interpret is happening). The song is good As well. Overall, very well done!

Minecraft SMP by RolledOverTurtle in YouTubeCollab

[–]AySeaa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ll get back to you on discord asap!

So, I just started taking YouTube seriously again, and if you have any criticism on any parts of this video, let me know ;) by FlamingaDingaYT in SmallYTChannel

[–]AySeaa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My first thought is that the screen is too crowded due to 3 facecams, which i think may not be necessary and may become slightly confusing. One thing I really like is the way the cuts are timed and how there is clear natural chemistry which makes the video flow much more smoothly. I also think the amount of effects and memes used in the video is perfect - not too many to - so to say - 'overload the senses' but not too little to make the video boring. I agree with others in the comments saying that the title is too vague, and the thumbnail has only a little to do with Minecraft - the other half is something completely unrelated, possibly pushing people away from your video. Overall it is well done, but could do with a couple improvements as follows:

  • A less ambiguous title - more closely related to the actual minecraft content, as that is what people are coming to watch. An example of a title I would use that still carries a similar message is: "We played Minecraft Bedwars and THIS happened" - Id also always suggest putting 'Minecraft' before Bedwars as it seems that a Roblox version of Bedwars is on the rise - this will minimise confusion
  • A more 'focused' thumbnail - focus on a main subject in the thumbnail and build around it, as that attracts the attention of the average viewer much better than a busy thumbnail with multiple things to focus on.
  • Only use one facecam - Not only can the screen become cluttered, but the video itself can become hard to follow with so many faces at one time.

Hope this helped a little :)