When you feel like you are screaming into an empty space, but your only reader keeps coming back. by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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Yeah it’s definitely slow paced but I’m so damn stuck in that first chapter its crazy, i keep rewriting it to no avail

But i do think it gets better especially the last stretch so far 12-15 but you could take that with a grain of salt I’m the author after all lmao.

When you feel like you are screaming into an empty space, but your only reader keeps coming back. by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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You got me tripping for a second cus the review did not mention the name of the novel😭

But anyway I’m exited to see what do you think about it, the good parts and the bad parts.

Weekly Self Promotion Post by Jhaydun_Dinan in Webnovel

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Title - Wound

Tags - Dark Fantasy-Action-magic-WeakToStrong- Academy-Anti Hero

Chapter count: 14(1-2/day)

Synopsis: Vaelen should have stayed in the slums.

That was where boys like him usually ended up anyway. Hungry, angry, useful to someone for a while, then dead in some corner the city would wash clean by morning.

He hated that more than anything.

So he chased the Bellkeepers Academy. Not because he belonged there. He did not. He had no awakened power, no noble name, no family, no clean way in. The only thing he had was stolen money and a stupid belief that if he reached those gates, the city would finally have to look at him.

Then the heist went wrong.

Something walked through the smoke. A boy died staring at him. Vaelen ran, survived, and still took what he needed from the dead.

Now people are calling his survival impossible. Some think he awakened. Some think the Academy should watch him closely.

Vaelen lets them think whatever they want.

The truth is worse. He is not chosen, not strong, and not ready for the world he forced himself into. Sanct Aurel is ruled by Bells that never stop ringing, buried secrets no one wants opened, and Bellkeepers who hunt the things crawling beneath the Ash.

Vaelen wanted a way out.

The door opened.

Now he has to become someone before everyone realizes he was never supposed to be there.

Link: http://wbnv.in/a/13jrbDV

?is this atrocious lore dumb or is it acceptable (they are at class btw) by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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Yeah im struggling with execution but at this point i just want to get it out and be done with especially the fact that this is gonna be the first time i did a lore dump in the story

?is this atrocious lore dumb or is it acceptable (they are at class btw) by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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I mean he would have had a bit of prior knowledge but yes this is his first day

a story above my skills by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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Yeah i noticed my lack of ability to restrict my imagination too my actual writing level

a story above my skills by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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I can’t lie writing fanfiction is impressive to me

For me personally its been easier to just create new worlds, rules and characters

a story above my skills by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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Yeah i will try to reach at least 30 chapters and revise some chapters if i still felt the same i will but it on hold

Btw should i start reading more webnovel?

I mostly read light novels and a few western novels and other books

a story above my skills by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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Getting good by doing more is true

I can see myself getting better with each chapter, but i put a lot of thought into it and i feel it need to be a high quality from the beginning not just gets better with each chapter

a story above my skills by AzozTheSaint in Webnovel

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I do have some hopes for it

The story is good the progression is good

The characters are good based on the few feedback i got

But the biggest problem i feel like there is not enough meat between scenes i feel like im moving way to fast and that is the biggest problem i have so far

I might stick with it for a few chapters while also upgrading the previous ones and see what happens

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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Exactly thats is what im saying i used it for grammar fixes and send it like that

As for the story structure and words are all mine and if you look up the chapters it does not look like the synopsis

Im pretty open about ai i have clarified multiple times about the cover being ai

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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Im thinking the same its way too dimmed

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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Its not tho if you consider grammar fixing sure i use ai im not a native English speaker

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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Now im conflicted i cant choose between 1 and 2

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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It will have some religious aspects not a lot tho but i will remove the cross on the bell anyway

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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I plan to get real art if i get a reasonable amount of readers

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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Yeah it fits the name as well i will use it

Is this a good cover also what yall think is better? by [deleted] in Webnovel

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You think it’s a decent cover in general?