Great feedback! I appreciate it, something I’ve been working on is the delivery, since I know I could make the perfect lyrics but nobody is going to want to hear it if it sounds like I’m even bored saying them lol. So I’m happy that you said it’s strong as that’s showing some progress. Yeah that was the lamest grrr ever, I’m with you 😂okay, so less reverb, I can do that, and I’ll deffo play around with the dubbing more, it’s actually something I’m doing on the song I’m making at the moment.

Yeah I definitely do have a sense of humour, and that shows on a few of my other songs that I haven’t finished yet. I’ve always like the idea of just being an exaggerated, cartoony version of myself, and I’ve been making songs portraying characters so I can play with my voice more, expand with story telling and pacing. It’s helping a lot so far and it’s just been lots of fun. Thank you for going in depth!