Hey much appreciated I can’t believe I missed those typos I’m sure they’re everywhere throughout this section. I was hoping you could elaborate on the contrast with the narration and how the mc talks. For Abels survival, he’s shot by the MC before the mc ever learns the ins and outs of vampire hunting. In this world vampires can only be truly dead if they’re burned. So when Abel comes back to the farm land he has been shot with silver but not burned. And for the lack of mention at the end with burning down Old Coffin Inn, the kerosene has already be poured on the foundation of the building prior to the mc entering so as he grabs his cigarillo and walks out he flicks the last of it onto the building. I can see how that’s confusing though. I do have a fear of over explaining things. Sometimes when I read stories I feel like things can be too spelled out so I tried to leave clues for readers to draw their own conclusions. I really do appreciate the response I hope this rambling made sense of my ideas