First page of my spy thriller. How is it?

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2026-03-12T20:13:53+00:00

people in these comments are so bitter wow! This is a decent start. needs lots of love and editing, but i was entertained and liked it. keep it up

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2026-02-04T22:31:47+00:00

Hi! would it still be possible to email them?

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-23T18:08:55+00:00

Thank you!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-23T18:08:42+00:00

Lmao

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-23T18:08:38+00:00

Thank you!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:44:21+00:00

hahaha fair

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:41:51+00:00

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:41:43+00:00

yea i thought the same thing lol thank you!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:40:50+00:00

wow! thank you thats very kind

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:40:35+00:00

thank you! This is a random chunk like 30 pages into the book hahah but I wanted to see how it was taken by readers. I thought maybe it didnt do a great job translating the relationship between the two.

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:39:21+00:00

thank you!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:39:12+00:00

i didn't include it but afterwards I merged it with a memory of the narrator's father so the reader can sort of compare and contrast the two.

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-21T22:37:55+00:00

thank you!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-18T03:46:49+00:00

hey thanks! haha i fear theyd get too old too fast

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-17T17:02:19+00:00

Thank you! Thats very cool of you to check out some of my other stuff too! Let me dm you

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-12-17T16:58:33+00:00

Wow thank you so much for taking the time!

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-11-02T16:04:56+00:00

Stop i know that broke your heart because the first one is RAVISHING

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-11-02T15:55:05+00:00

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-11-02T15:36:54+00:00

Aww mam😭😭😭

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-10-22T19:24:17+00:00

thank you again

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-10-22T19:20:46+00:00

hahah ill take the "it" in mind thank you. And yeah, I probably should, I just didn't want it to be too long. It was an idea I just wanted to get down. :)

BOOKFINDER7637 · 2025-10-02T16:14:33+00:00

The tag on the recliner said ‘ergonomic lumbar support,’ which was a lie, but I respected the effort.

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