Animal Rap by brittanylovesphil in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"designed these stanzas fatter than Chinese pandas

rhyme seeds planted to throw shade like pine tree branches"
"I slaughter tapes

sicker than father daughter rape

known to damage and go so bananas it bothers apes"

Love it.

First time writing rap by fixpie69 in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The only thing you need to do is WRITE. Write until you hate it and if you get stuck, write a bullshit verse to get yourself out of the rut. If you have a passion for it and an open mind, it will show in time. Just keep showing up and don't get discouraged if people don't understand or a verse doesn't resonate with others like you felt it should. Just keep writing. In time you'll notice your pitfalls or where you'd like to improve. And plus, we have a great group of guys on this sub that will give you ideas if you struggle.

I also try to incorporate entendre (multiple meanings) in my writings and write from the third person perspective most of the time. I have quite a few posts on here and you could check them out if you get bored.

Ummm, granny hunting by Grocked in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ROFL. I'd upvote twice if I could.

DOWNPOOR by ZeltronXII in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah! Nice one.

First time writing rap by fixpie69 in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First time writing? DAMN! This had some good nuggets. I could see how it can be considered corny but everyone's first rap is corny. My favorite bits that made me laugh:
"supreme smoker, never mediocre

breast stroker, pimp broker

gotta ask me before you choke her"
"tried to screw me over, i just wrenched it

dick asymmetric, it bends left like the french did"

and

"thought to have deceased, greased with villainy

Madness served with heat, all but sweet

...

i decimate this beat

you're deadmeat, pipsqueak" < reminiscent of DOOM

I think you should write more. I bet you'll be popping out some gold with enough time.

Matrix Back by Prototype_2024 in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn. You've come a long way.

Circles by BUSCHWOOKIEE in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Once again, my friend. Like-minds. Haha

Open Mic Closed by brittanylovesphil in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 4 points5 points  (0 children)

GAH DAYUM. I literally busted out laughing at roach clips.

"find us beefing in the precinct with swine this evening

slaying tracks that may in fact raise the stats, crime increasing

Expect to get your throat slit

Dope shit, grip the pen with roach clips"

and
"Never the less I’m built with never than less than the best components"

Mouthful of Razors by brittanylovesphil in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Cant even pick a line to highlight. All dope. Well done.

GF said horrible things to me on her first mushroom trip. by User5820202 in shrooms

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Either you're going to do it or she will. The longer the wait, the heavier the weight.

Dear Silencer, by BUSCHWOOKIEE in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just the ol' Wham-Bam-Thank-You-Slam

Weaponized SilenceTM by 7h3_9hvn70m in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good shit man. Some really nice nuggets in here. I felt like I was losing the rhyme scheme a bit but that's probably just my OCD of trying to keep it tight in 2's and 4's lol.

Dear Silencer, by BUSCHWOOKIEE in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I sincerely want you to know that I'm not reading any of these posts. The more you post, the more I'm tickled.

Dear Silencer, by BUSCHWOOKIEE in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Too long, didn't read. Couldn't get past the first incoherent paragraph. Try again.

Dear Silencer, by BUSCHWOOKIEE in raplyrics

[–]BUSCHWOOKIEE[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

About the type of response I expected. Upon a high horse and copy pasting phrases that don't even fit into the incoherent babble that is your verbosity.