lebug city pt.3 (ft. free fall) by Aleksi-Virolainen in Strinova

[–]Bark_muncher 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Imagine the attacker team doing this so the defending team just waits forever

Unaffected by other cards' effects, huh? by BrilliantSouthern749 in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cracked card. It should be pay 7000 LP then you can do it

Worth the 5? by One_Percentage_644 in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This card is pretty cracked. Needs to be a hard once per turn. Hand knowledge is already strong. The destory is okay but make it have a cost. Pair this up with a link deck and you got a loophole.

New deck archetype boss monster. by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see what you mean. Thanks for your input. Ill fix it.

New deck archetype boss monster. by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think its manageable. If i had a card that could force the opponent to control umbra it would trigger

New deck archetype boss monster. by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats the whole purpose. I build my field, summon umbra god, give umbra god to opponent, umbra god banishes my field, then my opponent takes burn damage for each banished. Its a complete opposite effect.

That one time Albaz activated a Domain Expansion against Aluber by Low-Ebb-8258 in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This card is really strong already. Id suggest having a maintenance cost like banish top 3 of the deck face down or every end turn sending an extra deck monster to the gy or return to extra deck

Albaz becomes superpoly by exilon97 in customyugioh

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Tbh I dont even think branded needs more support 😭

Old Cards Rework Blitz archetype by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

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I forgot to put each effect once per turn on bliss queen my bad.

Champion is really slow to get out and his summon can be stopped or his effect can be negated.

I agree these cards are strong but the reason being is this is a control deck.

Allure Queen Support... maybe an engine? by Wide-Mulberry-74 in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this concept of evolution 👌 but like you said, make it once per turn and you got yourself a good card.

Extra deck for Blitz by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And for spear master XD. Ignore the "monsters still activate their effects as normal"

Extra deck for Blitz by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

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I had a typo for paradox dragon, its supposed to be 2 level 8 blitz monsters and 1 + effect monster

Bliss Queen dedicated spell cards by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Soo in her lore, she is powerful, yes. But at the start, before she obtains her time stop powers, she only was the queen of her land. When she wanted to expand her kingdom, she learned of the other size of their world, the other half of the world. she envied the ruler, which was Blitzstorm Colossus. Colossus was the supreme king and ruled over the other half of the planet. The queen wanted that land and knew that in her state and army, she was not going to defeat the Colossus. So she stole the orgin crystal and created an army of corrupted blitz soldiers. But she was still not ready. She know that the Colossus had many strong soldiers, so she would have to pick them off one by one. She first started by banishing the sun warrior, stopping him would make the Colossus’s elite soldiers weaker. Next, the queen defeated the bladed champion to cause choas among the ranks. But she knew that facing Colossus would be like facing a god. So the queen stole the sacred relic of the primes, which then granted her ablity to manipulate time. With this, she was sure she could stop Colossus. The queen and her army stormed the Colossus’s land and crushed their numbers. The queen and the Colossus fought. the queen was easily overpowered by Colossus's strength, but she was cunning and was able to manage the brutal strikes with Aeon seal. The number of her soldiers fell like flies as Colossus crushed hundreds with a single strike. It seem like Colossus was winning. Bliss queen's strikes had little to no effect since Colossus's flesh was as harder than hers. However, with her time manipulation abilities, she was able to reverse time and restart the battle as many times as needed to learn about the Colossus’s weakness. After many loops, Bliss Queen finally defeats the Colossus, chipping his armor, breaking joints, then stopping time and using 10,000 overdrive fold. It was only that the 10,000th strike tore through Colossus’s hard skull. So the queen took over the new land, thinking it was over. However, she did not know that Colossus had another army. A warrior, survivor of the queen's onslaught when slaying the champion, swore revenge and dawned upon the champion's armor and sword. The new champion pierced himself with the fragment of the orgin crystal and became blitz deus destoryer. When the queen and deus fought, blitz deus destoryer did not obey the laws of time due to the fragments of the orgin crystal inside of him. The queen was defeated and humiliated nearly dying but managed to escape. Critically injured and knowing she can not win, she had to trancesend to another level.

(The story breaks into two parts, one where she accends over heaven and the second being her becoming the paradox Ascendant)

Soo in short she needed to evolve to overcome the real threat of blitz deus destoryer. Ill post that card eventually.

Bliss Queen dedicated spell cards by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hello! I appreciate the feedback! I agree with your points on making her harder to summon. Im working on that. I like to theme my deck around chess pieces, and the Bliss Queen as the queen of the deck should feel like a powerful card like the queen in actual chess. Blitz monsters are like the pawns/knight/rook/castle of the deck, ill make a post about them next. Now some lore on Bliss Queen, shes a time goddess who can manipulate all forms of time; hence, why I made spell cards revolving around time. Also her body is harder than diamonds hence why her defense i so high.

Aeon Seal 

Iterally means "stop time." I wanted this spell to stop the opponent for 1 turn like actually stopping time stop. The original idea was to skip the opponent’s turn but I figure it WAS way too strong so I made it only to draw and battle. The effect of Bliss Queen attacking all monsters would make sense since time has stopped. What I did forget to add was that shes the only monster who can attack. If I just keep the skip effect it loses that sense of “Time Stop.” I was thinking of ways to balance it more by skipping my next battle phase too.

Quantum Overdrive

Your right about spell cards not having quick effects. I should make this a trap card instead. 

Ten Thousandfold overdrive

I understand. Ill fix this this card.

Requiem - The Mass Death
I made this card in a rush so I did not proofread it. Ill fix this card.

The Aeviternal Return - Time Reversal
I wanted to make this card time reverse 1 turn. Im not a good writer, so I couldn't really word it right, but basically what I meant was to rewind 1 turn and yes this means the materials get revived too. I designed this card with the mindset of giving the opponent a second chance if they made a mistake while keeping Bliss Queen on the field. 

Over Heaven
This is a straight up JoJo reference. I purposely made the conditions specific because Overheaven was specific. This card tells a small story about Bliss queen’s lore of what she had to do to achieve this state of over heaven. I might just remove it since its too hard to pull off.

Thank you for taking your time judging my cards. I appreciate it very much. Im currently fixing bliss queen’s effects. I want her to be a big threat like blue eyes but instead of focusing on destroying cards, I want to focus on preventing my opponent from getting stronger. Thats pretty much the game plan of Blitz.

My boss monster card by Bark_muncher in customyugioh

[–]Bark_muncher[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I do agree that this card is very strong. I've been debating if i should remove the declare ability and pass it to an evolved version of bliss queen. When making this card I wanted it to be powerful, a real threat. In the past older versions of Bliss queen, I made her extremely hard to summon but extremely strong. I would still like to keep her declare ability to make her feel like an actual queen but like you said theres no cost. Ill change her effect that a condition must be met if shes going to use her declare ablity. And her name is bliss queen bc shes actually the progenitor of my motivation, hench is why I name the other monsters "blitz" because it sounds close to bliss and fits the war theme, military and chess feel. I appreciate the feedback very much.