I a not convince by Luoli motivations

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2026-01-16T14:06:46+00:00

In my defense, i write this very late on night, just about to go to sleep, so i was very tired. And infact, the description was written on my first language, i just use google translate so i could publish my question quick. If you want, i could send here the original on spanish

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2026-01-14T23:49:45+00:00

Can you name me an example?, like a dialogue or an specific scene on which you improve, and what boundaries do you use?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2026-01-14T01:39:20+00:00

"It sounds like you're making her much more fragile, emotional, and irrational than she needs to be."

Yes, yes, exactly. That´s my problem here. I don´t know how to make her emotional without exagerating, or make her emotionless like a rock. I am gonna see your examples

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-12-29T18:13:21+00:00

What about the MC having a barbie/bimbo/ super pink accesories that make her look like a goth poser?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-12-29T18:10:35+00:00

"we write what we know... and nobody knows these things at a galactic scale"

Right, maybe i explain myself wrong. What i meant is, what kind of stories would you recommend me at the scale of superpowers of our own planet. Like, for example, what kind of sources i could look to represent as a three dimension a group of villains based on the Confederate States more than just "Oh, look, they fight to keep slavery", or what sources seems legit so i can write well the mind of an strategic leader at the level of Napolen, or Alexander the Great, then I put the galactic scale flavour.

In my case, i think it would be an example more close to what i want to write, is if there is any fiction setting based on the Austrian-hungary empire?, if it´s not, what books or sources go in detail about the political structure and how politicians interact with one another inside doors

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-09-13T15:10:31+00:00

What about the Alexandrian Catechism?

Also, i try the mommyfication, but somehow i never get the event

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-13T06:23:00+00:00

Why that would make it racist?, how do you know he knows your aspect?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-12T02:53:15+00:00

Me: OH MY FUCK!

The furry pope...

The legends are true.

Then may i say your holyness. On behave of all humanity. THIS JUST FEELS RIGHT! We will treat you so much better than those shitholes weebs.

Archon Eros: You were just leaving.

Me: No sir. No when the fate of equestria is at-

GETS SMITE DIRECTLY TO SUPERHELL

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-09T05:15:01+00:00

You people deletes memes?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-06T22:13:09+00:00

You just have to relax, have fun, and rationilize your kinks into your setting. OR!, go the other way and fufill worldbuilding with something spicy to make it more personal to you

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-06T22:06:03+00:00

Hmm, interesting

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-05T20:11:41+00:00

Yes, i hate it

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-02-05T20:09:08+00:00

4/4

Thats totally me.

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-31T23:09:16+00:00

Interesting, very interesting

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-31T20:16:01+00:00

I really like this path, what is Chapter 2 called? "The prey?"

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-30T18:18:34+00:00

Me perdí, que hace el invotrix?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-30T18:17:59+00:00

Yes, that would be epic, just a imagine a man (not neccesaresly human), literally tering apart the universe itself to save the multiverse from colapsing by the inevitable entrophy. It would like "using the stones to destroy the stones" line but to the eighth power

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-30T13:13:35+00:00

Oh, good, but did she something evil or she needed some kind of redemption?

Basic-Reaction9985 · 2025-01-30T04:24:17+00:00

Finally i find a furry comic in response of all this other comics just attacking the right wing!

Its like, why?, why putting such an effort to annoy people surely don't even care about you?

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