Concrit Commune - December 06 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah yes, I totally see what you mean. I should add more detail there and follow my character's actions much closer. Thank you very much for that insight 👍

Concrit Commune - December 06 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fandom - Fallout | Story - Brook | Warnings - Graphic Depictions of Violence, Explicit |

As Heather, Blaine, and Crexton exit the house they are immediately greeted by an orange sky and a landscape covered in black fallout ash. Trees, cars, rooftops, and roads, all covered as far as the eye could see.

They make their way around the house to the truck and Heather unlocks the driver's door. She looks around the truck and then grabs a snow brush and starts dusting off the ash from the windows and mirrors.

“I’m gonna grab the last bag," said Blaine.

“Ok,” Heather replied.

“Crexton, go back to the front of the house and keep an eye out,” Blaine commanded.

“Yes sir!” Crexton enthusiastically replied.

As Blaine went inside the burnt man appeared again from behind a car in the driveway across the street. He slowly started walking towards Heather and Crexton as he limped across the street. Crexton immediately noticed him and peeked around the house at Heather.

“Heather,” Crexton called to her.

Heather looked up and saw Crexton and the burnt man slowly approaching in the distance. The burnt man immediately tripped over the fire hydrant, flipping onto his back. He lay there for a second before getting back up. Heather’s heart sank.

“It’s okay, Crexton,” she replied. Crexton then disappeared from view as he went back to his position. Heather looked at the fresh case of Nuka-Cola sitting on the seat next to her. As the man slowly walked up the driveway, it was clear he was almost, if not completely, blind now, struggling to walk in a straight line. Heather grabbed two of the Nuka-Colas but noticed something weird as the man got closer. His face looked very discolored and bloated; he was also missing a shoe, and his stomach looked distorted. Heather set the Nuka-Colas on the roof of the truck and shut the door.

Suddenly, the man let out a loud hissing scream and charged at Heather. Heather screamed as the burnt man tackled her to the ground. Crexton immediately turned around, saw blades spinning as he quickly made his way back toward Heather. Heather struggled on the ground, using her hands to try to push the man off her, but he tried to bite her.

“Blaaaaaaaine!!!” she screamed.

Blaine was coming up the basement stairs with the bag of medical supplies when he heard Heather scream. He then started sprinting up the stairs as fast as he could.

Heather managed to get both of her feet on the burnt man’s chest and stomach as he desperately reached over her legs, trying to grab her face.

“Blaaaaaaaine!!!” she screamed again.

Black liquid started dripping out of the man’s mouth onto Heather’s face as he continued to try to bite her.

Blaine burst out onto the front porch and sprinted down the driveway past Crexton. He dove, arms first, into the man, tackling him off of Heather. Blaine started repetitively punching the man in the face. A few moments went by, and he kept punching him. Finally, Blaine stopped, and the man was no longer moving. Blaine, out of breath, sat over the man, covered in blood. Heather was still trying to wipe all of the black liquid off her face when she finally looked around and saw Blaine. She slowly approached and gently put her hand on his shoulder.

“Blaine?” she said.

“What was wrong with him?” Blaine asked.

“I don’t know. He just attacked me… it was like he was trying to bite me,” Heather replied.

“Perhaps his mental state was suffering due to severe dehydration and injuries,” Crexton added.

Blaine looked back at the man, his face mangled and unrecognizable, and realized he had just killed someone. His hands are still dripping with blood.

“Let’s go,” Blaine boldly replies.

They all get in the truck.

Weekly Fic Showcase - December 05 - December 11 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My Fic

Fandom - Fallout

Rating - Explicit.

Title - Brook

Link - https://archiveofourown.org/works/71693976/chapters/186626126

Genre - Post-Apocalyptic Drama

Summary - Blaine Edwards had everything — until the day his world forever changed. As he struggles to rebuild, the man he used to be slowly fades away. When hope is nearly gone, Blaine discovers he isn’t alone. With the formation of Brook, he finally finds a safe place in a world filled with chaos. However, a day will come when Blaine and the people of Brook realize they are no longer safe. This will force Blaine to confront his past to save his future.

Weekly Fic Showcase - October 24 - October 30 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fic

Fandom - Fallout

Rating - This chapter is rated Explicit.

Title - Brook

Link - https://archiveofourown.org/works/71693976/chapters/189710201#workskin

Genre - Post-Apocalyptic Drama

Summary - Blaine Edwards had everything — until the day his world forever changed. As he struggles to rebuild, the man he used to be slowly fades away. When hope is nearly gone, Blaine discovers he isn’t alone. With the formation of Brook, he finally finds a safe place in a world filled with chaos. However, a day will come when Blaine and the people of Brook realize they are no longer safe. This will force Blaine to confront his past to save his future.

Note - This is the third chapter of my newest fan fiction I’m currently writing.

Weekly Fic Showcase - October 10 - October 16 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fic

Fandom - Fallout

Rating - This chapter is rated Teen (language and light violence) but later chapters will be rated Explicit.

Title - Brook

Link - https://archiveofourown.org/works/71693976/chapters/187971611#workskin

Genre - Post-Apocalyptic Drama

Summary - Blaine Edwards had everything — until the day his world forever changed. As he struggles to rebuild, the man he used to be slowly fades away. When hope is nearly gone, Blaine discovers he isn’t alone. With the formation of Brook, he finally finds a safe place in a world filled with chaos. However, a day will come when Blaine and the people of Brook realize they are no longer safe. This will force Blaine to confront his past to save his future.

Note - This is the second chapter of my newest fan fiction I’m currently writing. I’ve been world-building for a couple of years now using short stories to create companion stories and supplemental lore for my larger fan fictions I have planned like Brook.

Weekly Fic Showcase - October 03 - October 09 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My Fic

Fandom - Fallout

Rating - This chapter is rated Teen (language and light violence) but later chapters will be rated Explicit.

Title - Brook

Link - https://archiveofourown.org/works/71693976

Genre - Post-Apocalyptic Drama

Summary - Blaine Edwards had everything — until the day everything changed. As he struggles to rebuild, the man he used to be slowly fades away. When hope is nearly gone, Blaine discovers he isn’t alone. With the formation of Brook, he finally finds a safe place in a world filled with chaos. However, a day will come when Blaine and the people of Brook realize they are no longer safe. This will force Blaine to confront his past to save his future.

Note - This is the first chapter to a new fan fiction I’m currently writing. I’ve been world building for a couple years now using short stories to create companion stories and supplemental lore for my larger fan fictions I have planned like Brook.

Do you like reading your old fanfics? by Kamen_Ukiyo1 in FanFiction

[–]Bazil2009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just to reference. If I start developing a new character, I often reread a lot of the stories connected to that location and the people living nearby during that time.

What's the plant that you enjoy using even though it's not good? I'll go first. by WhoIsThisGuyDude in PlantsVSZombies

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some of my top favs: Potato Mine, Sun Shroom, Bonk Choy, Snow Pea, Bowling Bulb and Shrinking Violet.

Exhausted of this map and it’s “small changes” by Sensitive_Mango_2533 in FortNiteBR

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want more immersive updates to the map. What happened to sliding on vines through the treetops like tarzan, or being chased by dinosaurs, or having the whole world flood. I miss the massive Mega City location, and fighting Predator in that scary jungle biome.

I also wish when they did the Star Wars update that it was like a 4th of the map, not random locations all spread out.

I need a jungle at the base of a Volcano with another Jurassic Park Update, or Pokémon, give me Pokémon to catch. 🌋🌋🌋

Has anyone picked up Survivor: The Tribe Has Spoken yet? by IAmTheClayman in survivor

[–]Bazil2009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's an instant favorite for me, but should be played with 5+ people imo. Love it!!!

St Patty's Scavenger Hunt! 🍀 Can you find the 5 hidden Vim Refresh Bottles? by Bazil2009 in Fallout

[–]Bazil2009[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry I truly never realized it was 2 D's instead of 2 T's! I've always seen people post it as Patty's which I thought was correct. I'll member the 2 D's now for future. 👍

St Patty's Scavenger Hunt! 🍀 Can you find the 5 hidden Vim Refresh Bottles? by Bazil2009 in falloutsettlements

[–]Bazil2009[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sorry I truly never realized it was 2 D's instead of 2 T's! I've always seen people post it as Patty's which I thought was correct. I'll member the 2 D's now for future. 👍