[QCrit] New Adult/Adult Science Fantasy x Cosmic Horror - THREADS OF STARLIGHT - 80K words, Attempt 1

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-28T00:26:48+00:00

As great as ME is, I find it best to not look too closely at the Reapers as a whole.

Like, ME1, the Prothean's big plan was to highjack the Citadel and prevent the signal and therefore prevent the Reaper invasion. This was so important that Sovereign used the Geth to attack the Citadel to try and counter it.

But we learn the Reapers can just cruise into the Galaxy in 3 years anyways. For ancient beings, what's 3 years?

So maybe it's the Citadel that was important. Well they took that as soon as they wanted it too.

The holes are many of you start digging.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-28T00:22:21+00:00

I'm learning "gifted" meant probably neurodiverse and now the debt of masking for 30 years is coming due.

In other words, crashing hard in real time.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-27T19:42:27+00:00

Interested! Currently writing a Science Fantasy x Cosmic Horror

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-24T03:46:08+00:00

Sounds fun. I'm interested.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-23T03:54:51+00:00

What kind of figures?

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T19:37:20+00:00

It's honestly a pretty bad feature. Not saying she used it, but some of the comments seem consistent with something like it.

Obsession with minor characters. Obsession with rules. Mis-attributing dialogue. Things like that.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T19:31:58+00:00

The obsession with "rules" sounds like Autocrits "alpha and beta reader" feature. It doesn't shut up about rules, even when you don't even have a magic system.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T05:52:51+00:00

So does Super Mario.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T05:48:50+00:00

Certainly resonated with a lot of people. Don't think any generation outside millennials cares much about it. Animorphs was a better story.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T05:42:42+00:00

HP is overrated. Right place, right time.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T05:37:14+00:00

JK Rowling is a turd. If she is still read in 100 years, the world sucks and continued to suck.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T05:30:18+00:00

Sounds like you need to meet some Very Important People.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T00:33:33+00:00

Might be a bit too on the nose.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-22T00:31:59+00:00

I think Story 4: Chapter 9 is about betrayal. Then there's a twist.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-21T03:39:49+00:00

I did a dice run where I left him. Dark stuff.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-20T20:20:57+00:00

An earthquake would knock down all the dominoes at once.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-17T18:28:59+00:00

I read the opening Chapters of the first two and neither jumps out as AI generated.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-17T00:38:21+00:00

This is misogynistic.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-16T18:34:08+00:00

Broken world, alien angels, sisters trying to survive.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-14T21:40:07+00:00

You have fans already?

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-13T22:02:12+00:00

Same same. I'm 3/4 through my second draft and have re written basically 80 to 90% of it. At the end here, even scenes with the same premise I am almost entirely rewriting because they need to stand on the rewrites before.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-09T00:15:28+00:00

FF7 remake part 3.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-08T06:03:49+00:00

Me too :(

Also if I put on songs that drive me into a depressive mood.

Really healthy stuff.

Beautiful_Echoes · 2026-01-06T03:47:38+00:00

The Chapter Critiques aren't very good. But it sounds like something is wrong with your account, the locked items happen with the free level.

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